Saturday, June 5, 2021

The Fane of the Poppy

Summary: If you were raised to be a bloodsoaked warrior aristocrat and loyal unto death, when could your family’s actions go beyond the pale and what happens when they do?

Join Truanor Hightower of cruel Archzenith on a journey to the underworld where there seems to be no way home but to leave his soul behind. His underworld is Setroxia, the brainchild of Dan Sullivan.

UPDATE! Dan wrote a story set in Setroxia: he first imagined the city, and now he’s realized his original vision in prose. I asked if I could share it on my blog, and he graciously agreed.

Read Dan’s story, Viaticum, here.


Truanor Hightower gazed out of a thick, vast window over the burning bright, mysterious expanse of jungle around the city-state of Archzenith. The buildings rolled down pockmarked and spiking beneath him, terminating in steel-rimmed walls shouldering clusters of black flak cannons, machine guns pillboxes and anti-tank cannons. There were concrete dugouts a hundred meters back from the wall, bristling like orchestra pits with artillery guns and mortar daises.

Truanor turned his head and eyed a smorgasbord with a white tablecloth that sat even with the window but was set back deeper into the room. It had an integral ice chest running along the inside of it and there was a broiling radiator in parallel. One side of the table bore bowls of shrimp, pate, salmon and chopped fruit. The other side carried skewered meat, a seafood bisque and a creamy tanscale rainbow of fondues.

A pair of servants in black tunics trimmed with House Hightower’s teal livery stood against the walls with their hands folded over their groins.

Several boys pushed their way into the dark room. They wore the ebullient finery and teal accessories of Hightower nobles. They were Dio, Jovenar and Castor, Truanor’s cousins.

“Truanor at the smorgasbord!” cried Dio with a grin, “I thought he took all his meals rectally now!”

Truanor smiled.

“You look so clean today, Dio! Has your mother finally cautioned you about wiping with the House colors?”

“Yes, I only choke mongrel dogs with them now!”

Dio rushed at Truanor, who fell into a crouch and then leaped forward into Dio’s hips, knocking his cousin onto his back. Dio slapped Truanor across the face and Truanor headbutted Dio’s forehead, pushing his palms into Dio’s face.

“Kill him, Dio, or he’ll come back and steal your panties!” yelled Castor.

“Truanor, you’ve got to strangle him before the family gets any more inbred!” yelled Jovenar.

Dio drove a knee into Truanor’s hip, slipped an arm between them to grasp Truanor’s lapel, and then drove his cousin off him into the smorgasbord. Truanor felt his back lurch across a table leg, which proceeded to slide up and across him as the table was knocked over with a tremendous clatter. Dio grabbed a banana, seized Truanor by the jaw and attempted to drive the banana into his cousin’s mouth like a dagger. Truanor held him off, grabbed a silver platter that had been used for custards and bashed the flat side into Dio’s head. Dio gave an angry yell and drove the crown of his head into Truanor’s face, grinding his cheek into his molars.

“Boys!” yelled a voice from the door. Truanor and Dio froze and peered across themselves at the door. The servants had been silently piling food onto platters, but they froze in their bent-over states.

A man with dark, silver-striped hair was leaning in through the door. He wore dark garb with a dull teal cloak, and wore an 8” ornate warhammer in a velvet loop from his belt. He was Tazriem Hightower, Truanor’s uncle.

“Give me two for an errand.”

“I’ll go, father!” cried Castor at once.

The other boys were silent and Tazriem gazed about with a cold blue eagle’s eye.

“I’ll go too,” said Truanor with a sore jaw.

“Good. Follow me,” said Tazriem and walked away down the hallway.

Truanor pushed his way up past Dio and hurried out after Castor.

They walked down a long hallway of dark stone blocks lit by openings into space. The sky was white, and it was humid but cooler than usual.

“It’s time you took a hand in the family business. I’m sending you to Setroxia for a consignment of heroin from the lords of that godforsaken heap. You’re to meet with the local priests, who are a higher sort being Archzenite expatriates, and they will supply you with the heroin that we are owed.”

“The family business is heroin, uncle?” asked Truanor. Castor flashed him an angry, disbelieving look.

“The family business is whatever your superiors tell you it is, Truanor. The heroin is going to our Affidavit tribal allies. It is not some moneymaking scheme.”

They came to a stop on a jutting balcony promenade overlooking the city and jungle.

“We have no need for that.”

The nearby towers were windowless and coated with incandescent gold, and the city’s walkways shone with a fluorescent silver. The infinite, effortless wealth of Archzenith was infamous across the globe. It was the fruit of the Archzenith Antirenaissance, the mysterious disappearance of every artist in Archzenith, followed by an explosion of mining wealth unparalleled in human history. Precious metal had replaced other forms of decoration in Archzenith.

Tazriem Hightower pointed down to a brown river snaking away from the city, almost hidden among the molten boughs of the jungle.

“There’s a seaplane waiting for you there. The pilot will be at your disposal while you conduct your business in Setroxia. The priests are no longer citizens of Archzenith and they might attempt to worm their way into a new agreement. Don’t allow them to disrespect us. But the Setroxians know how to treat nobles. They have been trained into the proper respect for their superiors.”

“Excellent,” said Castor, “I hope they do try to renege on us, father. Bringing them to heel would ‘strengthen our relationship.’”

“Perhaps. In any case, we are owed ten kilograms of uncut heroin, and this is what I expect you to return with.”

“Of course, father.”

“Castor, you’re my son and you’ll be responsible for driving this little expedition forward. That doesn’t mean Truanor must do everything you say. You two will work that out amongst yourselves. Truanor, you are there to ensure the success of the mission. Am I understood?”

The boys nodded and murmured their assent.

“Excellent. Go and experience what is beyond our garden gates.”

The two bowed and headed for the nearest stairwell.

“Heroin!” said Castor with excitement, “Precious cargo for our first overseas caper, isn’t it?”

“It is,” said Truanor, peering through the little porthole windows of the narrow spiral staircase, “What do you think the Affidavits do with it?”

“Are you ten years old? They shoot it, fool. They’re strung out like ripped-off pearl necklaces. You do know why they stopped raiding us, right? Trade! It civilizes people!”

Truanor wasn’t sure what to make of this. His father had told him he’d cut Truanor’s arm off if he ever caught him shooting drugs. He’d shown him the silver machete.

Truanor and Castor split to gather their effects.

Truanor went to his vast bedroom and sat at the edge of his four-poster bed for a few moments, running his fingers over the familiar jungle print bedspread with tigers and serpents. He unlatched the iron bound chest at the foot of his bed and rifled through his effects. He set a Bowie knife, a Sarabande midwife and a sawed-off shotgun on his bed, then he extracted a fully-automatic machine pistol and a long ramming stiletto. He belted these and went to meet Castor at the stairwell.

His cousin wore a long, thin flamberge rapier. The handle was shaped like a serpent with an open, fanged mouth for a cross guard, and the long, slithering blade emerged from the mouth as a tongue. He was twirling a .44 magnum with rattlesnake leather grips on his finger.

“Choosy princess,” Castor said.

“You never were much for preparation,” said Truanor.

“Oh but cousin, weren’t you the one who was unfamiliar with Affidavit customs? And House Hightower affairs? And the nature of Setroxia, I presume? I think you’re a compromising element on this mission.”

“I’m here to make sure you don’t overdose or otherwise dishonor the family name. I’m not the one your father thinks will compromise House Hightower’s honor.”

They walked out into the streets of Archzenith and down towards the walls. The cafes, bars, shops and restaurants were roaring even midday, though the theaters, galleries and music halls had all been converted for other functions. People were staggering around in enormous fur coats, swaddled in cashmere scarves, bedecked in pounds of jewelry and frostings of makeup.

“What is honor, cousin? If one of these jumped up commoners stepped up to me I’d slash him. He has no honor. The Affidavits had honor, once, but they chose to sleep it away. They may be a terror to other tribes, the manioca-slurpurs and the grub-gatherers, but to a civilized man they’re nothing but lapdogs fit for the chase or the kennel. They worship our agriculture, the kennel keeper, papavar somniferum.”

“I’ve heard they worship a giant serpent. A megaviper. It was supposed to be a jade, jeweled rod that turned into a god when they tried to roast it.”

Castor made a farting noise with his lips.

“Puffs of smoke.”

They reached the walls. Archzenite soldiers in black boilerfatigues and gleaming silver breastplates sprinted to unlatch the gates, their rifles clanging rhythmically in symphony with their steel-toed boots on the concrete.

The tiny pedestrian door was made of depleted troglodite, far more valuable than gold. It swung open as laboriously as a bank vault for the cousins, who stepped out onto the rough flagstone trail and down into the Affidavit jungle.

The air was cool on Archzenith hill, as far as jungle climates went, but there was no breeze down by the river. Fat dollops of warm water fell on the cousins as they strolled beneath the overhanging canopy. The flagstones became more and more consumed with vines and mud that seemed to engulf manmade things in this place. Gazing into the jungle, Truanor lurched and staggered as he saw humanoid forms watching them. At first he thought they were hanging fetishes which the Affidavits used to mark their territories, but they were men. They seemed to have crocodilian skins. The backs of their arms were ridged and bumpy, their chests ringed horizontally, perhaps the result of scarification or the insertion of ivory beneath the flesh. Each had a vast quantity of painted knives stashed, tucked and hung across his body to the point of decoration, and they had fully-black eyes like reptiles.

“Those are eerie ones, aren’t they,” said Truanor.

“They’re the warriors. They might have given you quite the fright, but they’re the hard core of their society. Even you shouldn’t lose your nerve at the sight of their regular men and women. Trust me, the only honor the Affidavits have is in their warrior lodges, since they live away from those slime pit warrens. You’ve never seen an Affidavit fastness. They could have been cities, given millennia. Now they’re like wood-plank castles set up and forgotten by children.”

The two Archzenites came to a little mud beach next to a river that swirled and frothed like a jacuzzi. There was an expensive Ascension Aeromarine seaplane at anchor, curling back and forth in the water like the paw of a satisfied cat.

Truanor stopped dead where he stood on the mud slope between the end of the flagstone trail and the waterline. There were a number of ponderous human forms laying flat in the mud like seals.

They must have been Affidavits, but they were totally different from the warriors. They were morbidly obese, wearing almost nothing, laying in a line like hoagies on a platter. The nearest one lolled his head towards them with heavy-lidded eyes, then began trying to struggle onto his side so he could stagger away and escape. To his left was an enormous woman laying on her back; chocolate bile had filled her nostrils and she was not breathing.


“What’s wrong with them?” Truanor cried.

Castor gave him a withering glance over his shoulder.

“They’re enjoying the sacraments of the opium priests, cousin…”

“But… Castor, we can’t make anybody into that! Let’s show Uncle Tazriem what… what this is turning people into!”

“Blame the confectioners before you blame our family,” sneered Castor, “We’re not the only ones who supply them with the fruits of civilization. Lay down and cuddle with the Affidavits if you want, you’re as tiresome as they are. I’m getting the pilot.”

Castor walked down along the waterline and whistled at the seaplane, whose pilot glanced out the window and waved, starting the engine. He motored the roaring machine near enough to the shore that the nobles could board without wetting their feet; the Affidavit had failed to get up and lay still, blinking slowly. Another Affidavit had raised his head to look at the flying machine, but the others were catatonic.

The seaplane negotiated the river for some time, straddling rocks and scraping beneath branches until they reached a wide plane of brown water. The Archzenites could see two-story thatch houseboats far up the river; one manner of Affidavit residence. The seaplane accelerated and took off over the houseboats, blowing twigs and daub from their roofs.

“I’m concerned about you, cousin. You’ve been acting the coward and the naive child since we left Hightower Hall. How are you going to deal with the Setroxians when you wet your panties at the sight of some puffed-up primitives enjoying the riverbank?”

“There’s a line, Castor. What we’re doing to them doesn’t involve honor. We haven’t even taken them by force. We’ve rotted them like candy rots a tooth.”

“You simple, silly little lass. You are such a… you’re like a child playing with dolls, and every one of them gets to win its heart’s desire. Is your thinking on force and victory so shallow? Force is a spectrum. It takes many forms. It’s like magic. It’s not all fire and thunder.”

“It’s not about force,” said Truanor, “We’re making them useless. To us, as much as to themselves.”

Castor shrugged. “They were useless before, they’re marginally less useless now, keeping the other tribes in check. But listen, cousin. We’re dancing around the real issue. Your lack of loyalty.”

“I am loyal. But I’m loyal to House Hightower before any… any single issue.”

“Were you going to say, ‘before any single uncle’?”

“Perhaps before any cousin! You and I are on the same level! Your father said it: you’re not the dictator of this expedition. So if I tell you you’re wrong, that has nothing to do with disloyalty.”

“You have your orders, sweetheart,” hissed Castor, “and you’ll carry them out no matter what your aching heart makes you blurt.”

They sat without speaking for some time while the propeller roared.

What could Truanor do? His cousin was fully invested, but when Truanor looked into the future, if he participated in making people into those bloated slugs in the riverside shade he saw his soul becoming weak, hollowed out, a pawn, a lifeless cog in a gray, grinding machine.

Truanor was not afraid to kill. He was eager to strike down any scion of another House in a street fight. He would be glad to lead an expedition against the savages that still resisted Archzenith’s rule. His heart had ached at the conclusion of the victorious war with Palgrove because he was just a little too young to participate in it.

Truanor would gladly kill rivals, Cynthians, Palmgrovers, and barbarians. But kill and be done with it. Kill in the heat of battle, then let the corpses burn on the pyre of glory. Don’t cage your enemy in an underworld on earth. Don’t rot his blood, his bones and his soul while he still lives.

If Truanor participated in this, then his future would mean little to him. The gleam of the glory he’d expected would be gone. But if he stood against his family, there would be nothing left for him. It would mean walking off the end of the earth. He’d have less position than a peasant. He’d be a hunted, mendicant pariah.

“Your soul is more rotten than those pigs on the beach,” said Truanor, “They’ve made their world into a dream, you’ll make yours into a nightmare. We were raised to be warriors, not dealers of drugs. I’ll protect you, though I wish I could let you reap what you sow. I’m going to be a second set of eyes in whatever godawful gomorrah we’re going to. My loyalty is to House Hightower, and you’re a Hightower. But I won’t participate in this as anything other than a guardian. You’re on your own when it comes to handling the heroin.”

“Ha! You think yourself a warrior, but your heart’s soft and sweet as funnel cake. We’re going to see how long your loyalty holds up when it’s already been cracked by a stroll along the river trail. I think you’ll lose it in the City of Smoke and Ruin, as the wholesalers say.”



The biomes shifted beneath their plane. Jungle gave way to sea, sea gave way to scrubland. The land was bright and fertile by the coast, but as they flew inland it grew more and more ashen.

“Where will we land?” called Truanor to the pilot.

“They have a big trough of water in the city. It’s a reservoir. Lately they’ve had to turn it into a fortification because the fields are drying up.”

“Should we really be landing in that?”

The pilot shrugged.

“That’s where I’m supposed to land, Master Hightower.”

“Don’t harass the peon, Truanor, your prattle does dull the senses.”

Truanor clenched his jaw and gazed out of the window. The tan desert of crabgrass and cacti suddenly turned into a blooming wonderland of luscious red, pink and purple fields.

“What- they’re like flower gardens… they’ve made a flower garden in the desert! It must be vast.”

“That’s exactly what it is, you droll buffoon. Far more productive than the saffron and dye they used to plant in that worthless earth.”

A city came into view. It was a vast expanse of tan stone squares stacked up on each other in rolling blankets or brickpile castles. There were enormous manors and houses of state in the city center like bulbous cathedrals or monolith mausoleums, and here and there were scattered spike-walled complexes of rich and ornate manor homes clad in mosaic, or graven marble and gracefully-wrought iron ivy. Straddling the city was an enormous statue that was made of onyx, jet, or cast iron. Truanor couldn’t tell. It was holding a vast, gleaming red ruby to its eye, and it must have looked like some kind of predatory shadow demon by night.

“Know what that is?” asked Castor with a smile.

“A statue.”

“It’s a superweapon. It can roast whole armies. And when the high nobility want to punish someone, they put a rope around his head and bake him with the statue’s beam until it cracks his skull like an eggshell. Say what you will about this hovel of badland yokels, their nobles have style.”

The biplane turned and began to descend towards the city. Indeed, at the heart of the metropolis was a long strip of dark, shimmering water, and the biplane came down between the houses and towers with a thump along the freestanding canal. There were little pleasure boats here and there but their passengers hauled them up onto the stone block bank as the seaplane approached.

They came to a stop and Truanor looked around. There was a 10’ tall caterpillar of barbed wire that had been strung around the canal as a fortification. There were soldiers carrying bolt action rifles and were characterized by wearing militarized versions of the vast-brimmed hats characteristic of latifundia field capos. These were normally worn wide open but could be tied up like a parcel atop their heads when close-quarters activity was required.

“Shall we disembark?” Truanor asked the pilot.

“Is he in charge?” spat Castor as he stepped out of the plane onto its pontoon, then onto the stone wall of the trough.

“Thank you. Good landing,” Truanor said to the pilot, who bowed his head very low. Truanor stepped out onto the pontoon, then halted, transfixed, as he was met with the point of a slithering rapier.

“Sorry cousin, but I’ve made a decision. You’ll be going back to Archzenith now. You’re too soft, cowardly and morally confused to be present for this affair; you’re a liability and you being here makes it less likely I’ll come home, not more so.”

Truanor grimaced and whipped the rapier away from him with his stiletto as he drew it, nearly knocking it from Castor’s grip with a clang. Heads turned from all around the canal. Truanor brought the stiletto level with his armpit, ready to dart a stab into Castor if he needed to.

“Your blood is on your own head unless you sheath that tentacle. Remember that our pilot has no loyalty to a corpse, and these soldiers will be glad to tell anyone what they’ve seen today.”

“Hmm,” smiled Castor, “I guess you’re less of a kitten than you seemed, cousin. Very well. You’ve passed my test.”

Truanor shook his head slowly.

“Don’t push me again, cousin. I value Hightower blood, no matter how corrupt the vessel.”

Castor stepped down from the wall of the great trough and spread his arms. “Come on then, Truanor. Let’s see the sights of this magical place. I know it will transform you. Your soul and your backbone.”

Truanor stepped out onto the canal wall.

“Walk in front of me or I will transform you,” he said.

Castor’s smile disappeared. “Don’t be tiresome. I’ve given you a degree of respect and you cast it back in my face.”

Truanor stared into his eyes. “I will cast my boot into your face if you don’t start walking, and we know where that will end.”

Castor gave him a mirthless smile once more. “Of course, cousin. Let’s go find the our erstwhile countrymen, the Orthodoxy of Opium. You’ll be able to relax once you feel more at home.”

Truanor sheathed his stiletto and followed Castor. The soldiers were watching them, smiling with amusement or standing in awe of the warlike fractiousness of these splendid foreign nobles. A few of them trotted to the wire and used their bare hands to pull out an opening for them, gingerly plying the steel with their fingertips.



The nobles passed human wreckages with every stride. There were wizened corpses mummifying in the corners and alleyways, blackened wind-warped things with white teeth still gleaming, laying curled up on themselves like seekers of warmth. Sitting among the actual piles of corpses were emaciated men with filthy beards and women whose lips seemed to have been sucked down into their throats, yet their flesh still hung loose from their necks and puffed-up arms like hens.

The worst thing to Truanor were the children; curled up things like turkey roasts, waiting to die in the alleyways or thronging the Archzenites until Castor kicked one of them like he was teeing off on a ballfield, drawing his rapier. The boy who’d been kicked just lay down in the dust, holding his frail torso, and Truanor considered reopening the feud for a chance to stab Castor, but ended up simply stalking behind him while taking deep breaths so as to calm his heartbeat.

“Where are we going?” asked Truanor gruffly.

“There’s a grand temple in the center of the city.”

“Fine.” Truanor gazed around this place. “You and your underhanded power. We’ve had more food than we could eat since the Antirenaissance. This place could be our client state if we fed them.”

Castor shrugged. “This isn’t Palmgrove. Why would we want to be responsible for such a stain of shit?”

Truanor shook his head. “This place isn’t anything like what it could be if it weren’t for the drought and the heroin. It’s a metropolis.”

They turned a corner and stood before a huge, gray marble temple with a dark cavernous opening behind a smooth colonnade.

“Ah, here we are!” smiled Castor. The broad front steps of this building were scattered with bright flowering poppies and their petals like a bath prepared for a lover.

Castor walked up the steps and walked into the temple. Truanor followed but was stopped by a horrific miasma from the arched mouth of the temple. The doorway smelled of rotting meat, sweat and feces. Truanor gazed into the darkness; inside were hundreds of human forms wrapped in filthy wool blankets, scattered all over the beautiful but defaced tile scenes of a hundred dead pantheons. Men in ornate robes were walking slowly throughout this place; they had braziers of incense in one hand and long needles in the other. Shepherds of the dying, herding them into the abyss.

As Truanor’s eyes adjusted to the darkness, he saw thousands of rats crawling over the bodies, both those that were dead and those that still moved.

“Cousin. I’m not entering this place.”

“Hmm. Well that’s a relief. See you at the canal at sundown.”

Castor continued into the darkness. Truanor lurched away from the door and leaned against a marble pillar. He could still smell the temple and he began to retch, vomiting a thin stream of liquid onto the flagstones. He staggered down the steps and sat, his head spinning. This was the death of the human soul. The fate of its final surrender. A willing half-step into hell on earth.

He gripped his head, looking down at the step beneath his knees. He had to get away from this place. He stood, and walked away, and wandered down a side-street which had been laid over with the unswept dust of the wasteland. He passed a fat, bearded artisan who was driving an emaciated, shirtless slave before him, slashing at him with his belt buckle.

Truanor smashed the man’s head with an open palm in a state of anguish and fury that he hadn’t felt since he was a toddler. The man fell against the wall with a thwacking noise and lay on the stones with blood streaming from his forehead. The bruised slave simply crouched down on his heels. Truanor put his boot under the man’s rear and tried to lift him up.

“Get up! Don’t just sit there, damn you!” he said. The slave rose and then sat again. Truanor stalked away from the scene with one hand on his stiletto and the other one on his gun.

He came to a little dessicated bazaar in an alley courtyard. There were merchant’s stands that were dried up and falling inwards like the wispy corpses of spiders; hanging canvases turned to paper, lengths of wood turned to brittle reeds by age and dust. Truanor sat on the edge of a counter and wrapped his cloak around himself.

Before long a few shadowy figures wrapped in canvas or strips of torn-up bedsheet came drifting into the bazaar. They were eyeing Truanor with bloodshot eyes and they had knives, hammers and firepipes woven onto their bodies with fabric. They picked at themselves and tugged at what clothes they had, and none of them seemed to ever stop moving.

“You’re beautiful,” one of them rasped.

Truanor undid the safety on his machine pistol beneath his azure cloak.

The group began to lurch through the bazaar towards him, spreading out and looking around. None of them seemed like they had a drop of water in their bodies. The only color on them came from livid, splotchy red sores all over their mottled arms.

“What are you?” Truanor asked them.

“Petitioners of paradise and proponents of the Orthodoxy,” rasped one of them, gazing at Truanor with fiery eyes above a wrapping of gauze over his mouth and nostrils. This had once been an educated man.

“And what do you want?” asked Truanor, shifting his body as he drew his machine pistol, holding it along his forearm behind his cloak.

“Take off everything you have on you. We’re going to sell your finery to the priests, but I’m also going to see what a strong, healthy body looks like again before I die.”

They began drawing their knives, hammers and firepipes, holding them limply near their thighs or fiddling with them in front of their pelvises.

Truanor opened fire from inside his cloak, chopping down three of them with his first burst. The gunshots beat at his arms and filled his cloak with heat, and the air before his face billowed with fibers from his shredded garment. The other robbers began lurching for cover behind the bazaar’s market stalls, but Truanor raised the machine pistol in both hands in front of him and felled another two of the half-clothed creatures before the rest of them could make it to cover. Truanor’s gun was now burning hot.

One of the robbers poked a firepipe over the top of a stall counter and depressed the lever with incongruously fat, swollen fingers bundled on a bony wrist. There was a bang and sparks flew from the mouth of the pipe along with a puff of pure white smoke; there was a cracking near Truanor’s thigh as the bullet whiffed through his tattered and singed cloak.

Truanor hadn’t realized that this was a firearm, and he dove through the dust underneath a stall lest another robber be drawing down on him, filling his sleeves with sand in the process. A pair of ragged feet appeared before his face, yellowed nails curling deep into the gnarled toes. Truanor emptied his magazine through the shins, which blasted open like thunder-smitten logs. The man’s legs were unstrung and he fell on his back in the dust, gasping, his tape-handled knife laying by his split open shins, which had only just begun to bleed.

Truanor leapt up and banged his head on the counter; feeling nothing but a lump he sped forward in a crouch. A robber in a sackcloth came at him holding a raised masonry hammer up in the air behind him like he was trying to keep it as far as possible from Truanor.

Truanor darted at the man stiletto first in a dueling attack that he’d trained since he could walk. The stiletto slipped through the man’s ribcage like there was nothing there; the hammerman didn’t seem to notice he’d been stabbed but his approach halted and he made no attack with his hammer. Truanor withdrew the stiletto and stuck it an inch into the man’s thin breast. At this he dropped his hammer, turned and began to sidle away with his head hanging against his chest.

Truanor saw other forms moving among the stalls but he turned and sprinted through the alleys and streets the way he’d come. The slave and his master were gone, but there was blood on the wall and cobblestones. Finally Truanor came to a halt, panting, in the great square of the temple of the poppy.

He walked over to a cabinetmaker’s shop and leaned against the wall. The business, at least, seemed to be functioning. He could hear hammering and sawing behind the wall. Such plebeian noise would have annoyed Truanor in Archzenith, but he was grateful for it now.

A pair of men in black hooded cloaks with golden trim came walking near him. Truanor spit in the dirt.

“You heroin priests?”

The priests looked at each other and then at him.

“No. Nothing could be farther from the truth.”

Truanor raised an eyebrow.

“Then what are you? You look holy.”

“We are keepers of the old faith. Do not mistake Setroxia for a monotheistic city. Many creeds were once represented here. Now only our faith, the true faith, carries the light.”

“So fades the light, so fades the water,” observed the second priest.

“I’m glad to hear you’re not with that cult. They’ve made this city hell on earth.”

“Not all of it is ruined, but I understand why you might think that, standing as we are before the pusher’s fane. The solvent of souls. We serve the Earl of Setroxia, and his holdings are well-maintained. Where do you hail from?”

“House Hightower, City of Archzenith. I was sent here with my cousin to score heroin, but there’s no way in hell I’m going inside that temple.”

The men looked at each other, then one asked,

“Must you wait here in the open? This district is not famed for its civility.”

“I’ve got nowhere to be til sundown. That’s when I’m meeting my cousin at the canal.”

“We are going to the House of the Earl right now. Come take a meal with us, if you’d like.”

“Anywhere but here,” he nodded, “Where’s the Earl’s manor?”

“The Earl prefers to live at his latifundia outside the city proper, but maintains a fortified manor house east of here.”

They started walking together.

“Which faith do you practice in Archzenith?” asked one of the men.

“Reism, mostly. The lower orders follow a host of disciplines. You’ll find many nobles think of the world as a battleground, a proving ground for some kind of consciousness that pokes its tendrils into the universe in the form of human beings. That’s why the noble houses fight each other, we’re like finger puppets. I don’t think that, but just the idea is a relief for some of us. Now the commoners, they can think what they want as long as they follow us in wartime. The aristocrats see them as having a different purpose than leadership and struggle.”

“Yes, so they fight and kill because of the call of the divine! Not far off from the truth, but have you ever considered that the presence which you regard as a consciousness may in fact be something more akin to an energy field or an energetic source?”

“You mean the Monad. It’s possible. Some people think that agony feeds the Monad. In Archzenith it’s more like, kill all you want but there’s no need to torture; if you die you go back to the Consciousness, but torturing a person tortures consciousness as such. Consciousness can’t be killed, but it can be made to suffer.”

“It must be admitted that whatever you Archzenites may believe, you feed the Monad better than most,” said the holy man. They arrived at a great fluted gate outside of a manor composed of cast iron blocks and domes with artillery ports. This place was not built for beauty: it was a pure fortress. There was a good deal of activity on the other side of the gate; gardeners with wheelbarrows, masons laying new foundations on the spare grass between the cobblestone paths, a servant taking kitchen orders from foremen.

Truanor smiled in spite of himself.

“Gentlemen, this place is functioning properly. I can’t believe it.”

“A year ago, I would have chastised you for your pessimism. No more,” said one of the priests. They stood until the portcullis was raised.

Truanor followed them down a stony path that was lined with dusty cypress trees.

“What are they building out here?”

“We don’t expect the coming years to be easy. The Earl wants as many of his retainers as possible living on his property, so we’re digging in and laying down foundations for new homes.”

“I see. You gonna get a church out of it?”

“We already have a chapel in the center of the manor. Would you like to go there after lunch?”

“Certainly.”

“It is well. You’ll find it’s a walk from where we’ll be dining near the kitchens.”

The priests led him through an alcove entrance into the manor. It was a place of dark splendor; black, white and midnight blue tiles, gold and onyx statues of skull-faced knights, smiling tortured death goddesses, saints armed with knives, pliers and dynamite. There were frescoes of sandstone and cinnabar depicting wars, massacres, even slave revolts that appeared to be successful in killing many of the city’s overseers. Truanor began to grow uneasy.

The priests led him down a grand stairwell that branched off as it pleased into different parts of the manner; they took him down a minor staircase that was made of wood and seemed to cut through a wall that had been mined out after its construction. Truanor smelled food, and after traversing a winding 6’ corridor for a hundred meters or so they entered a, low small room with a round table. There were stacked up stools and metal cabinets in the corners; the priests took a few of the stools down and handed one to Truanor.

“What would you like for lunch?” asked a priest.

“What’s on the menu?”

“Whatever you like. We’ve been amassing quite a reserve given our lack of food security.”

Truanor loved roast beef fresh off the fire, he would eat it by the pound and drink its juice, but he wasn’t in the mood for flesh after what he’d witnessed in the temple.

“Black rye, some hard cheese, if you’ve got it, and a glass of cider.”

The priest nodded and glanced at his companion, who said, “Escargots in hot butter with parsley and sage, a thirty ounce ribeye sautéed in portobello and shallots, rare, a bowl of pitted kalamatas, and a glass of the Inamorata.”

“I don’t know how you drink that swill,” the other priest said, and departed.

The priest plied Truanor with questions about Archzenith. He seemed delighted by the debellatio of Palmgrove, the enslavement of the POWs in Archzenith’s mines, the disappearance of the city-state’s artists, and the devastation wrought on the Affidavits, their continued war against the other nearby tribes.

A priest returned with a pair of pale, unsteady young men in felt tunics who laid a heaping feast upon the shabby little table. Truanor appreciate the smell but was satisfied pressing bits of cheese into his rye, drinking it down with his cider

When they had finished, each man leaned back in his chair.

“How was your food?”

“It was good,” said Truanor, “even in Archzenith you can’t always get proper black rye.”

“Good, good. You feel refreshed? Embiggened?”

“I suppose so,” said Truanor, pursing his lips.

“Good. We’re ready!” the priest called. The door opened and a man in an blue shirt and black beret entered, kicking the door shut behind him. He carried a glossy .45 submachine gun and pointed it at Truanor.

The priest who’d inquired about Truanor’s lunch drew a long, silver dagger from his sleeve apologetically.

“I was afraid of that,” said Truanor.

“It’s not because of our religion. Well, it is, but this would have to happen even if we worshipped unicorns. This way, fed to satisfaction and then bled, the Monad gets you at your very best and all of existence is enriched.”

“Why are you killing me in particular, then?”

“Your city buys so much opium. You keep the Orthodoxy of Opiates alive, you and cities like yours. Without a buyer, their faith has no basis. So it’s better if you just disappear when you come here, even if it means a war with your city. It’s better if they think it’s futile to send their children to Setroxia.”

Truanor closed his eyes. He should have been more suspicious but he’d let himself be enticed here by the prospect of food, comfort, fellowship and beauty after the horror of what he’d seen. Now, one way or another, he was going to be shot. He would kick himself off the ground and fall backwards in his chair, drawing his machine pistol and spraying the room. The submachine gun man would shoot him first but the recoil-

The door burst open. Everyone jumped. A silver .45 pistol poked through the doorway and emitted an earsplitting bang, blowing the top of the gunman’s head off with his black haired scalp coming loose like a floppy hat. Truanor felt a profoundly light mist blow past him with this; not blood, per se, just moisture. The shooter pivoted his arm around the door and shot the knife-wielding priest in the face; chunks of bone, lead and gore were dotted across a mop leaning on the wall behind him. Truanor curled in on himself as the gunman’s smoking pistol fanned past him and came to rest pointing at the final priest.

“W-“

There was a final tremendous bang that seemed to carry a shockwave of physical force with it. The bullet blasted through the corner of the priest’s forehead and tiny pieces of bone were scattered all throughout the room; little chunks of bone and brain fell into Truanor’s hair and down his collar.

Truanor was cowering down, holding himself around the midsection, but he felt that being skipped in the rotation must increase his chances of survival. He looked up and was greeted with the smoking barrel of the killer’s pistol.

The man was dressed in a steward’s tunic. His dark hair was flecked with white although he looked to be in his early thirties.

“Who are you?” the man asked, gazing through his pistol smoke at Truanor.

“Truanor Hightower. Of Archzenith.” He knew his city had a fearsome reputation.

“You’re a narcotrafficker,” the man stated.

“Not my first choice of profession,” Truanor deadpanned.

The man’s pinkie and ring finger loosened their grip on the pistol.

“Well, you’re free to go now. Shake a leg,” said the man, who turned and darted back into the hallway.

“Wha- Wait!” yelled Truanor and rushed after him, banging bloodstained dishes with his thigh as he rounded the table.

Truanor rushed out into the hallway, which was made of round gray stones and mortar, and saw the man sweeping away, deeper into the fortress. Truanor followed, passing a pair of scullions who were nervously advancing on the room to investigate the gunshots. Finally Truanor caught up to the man at a T-intersection of corridors.

“Wait!” he hissed. The man spun on him, glaring at him with clear and bright eyes.

“Why’d you save me?”

“They were about to execute you.”

“Well, so what?”

The man shook his head.

“Archzenith. Look, you need to escape. Go enslave some kitchen boy and make him dig you a way out of here.”

“I was a child when that war went off! And I’m not here to traffic drugs! Not anymore.”

“What are you talking about?”

Truanor glanced around.

“This is complicated. Can I talk to you? Let’s find somewhere private.”

“There won’t be anywhere private down here in about two minutes. I’ve potentially compromised my cover to help you. Now it’s on you to make something of it.”

“Well, let me help you! Then we’ll be square and we can get out of here together!”

“Are you trained in infiltration?”

“Of enemy trenches, yes.”

“That’s not what I mean though I’ll keep that in mind. Take off your fucking House Hightower colors and follow me.” The man set off. Truanor stood flat footed for a moment and followed.

“How’d you know about my colors? Are we that famous?”

“Infamous. But I’ve been trained on you. A know-your-enemy kind of thing.”

“Enemy? Just who are you?” Truanor stopped in his tracks. “You’re a Cynthian Knight.”

The man whirled on his heel and seized Truanor’s House Hightower cravat with one hand and his stiletto with the other, roughly yanking Truanor’s nose within inches of his own and pressing the point of the dagger against Truanor’s belly.

“Call me that again.”

They were both silent for a moment as the man stared into Truanor’s eyes.

“I’m Johannes Bloodroot, Starling & Shrike.”

The man let him go and continued on. Truanor stood for a moment before following him.

“What the fuck was that for? We aren’t enemies! We’re at war against the Cynthians!”

“Exactly.”

“You’d better be more fucking careful! We’re prickly where I come from!”

“Ungrateful for his life two minutes after I saved it. And you thought I was the aristocrat.”

“I am grateful, but watch it! My self control isn’t limitless!”

“That’s what I’m afraid of.”

Bloodroot opened the rough wooden door of a grain well that descended deep into the earth. He stepped inside onto the surface of the grain reserve. A few rats squeaked and scurried into the hallway, glued to the wall as if by gravity while they slipped by Truanor, who followed Bloodroot into the darkness.

“The Earl’s men are going to come down this hallway eventually. We’re going to be underneath the grain when they do.”

Truanor looked down and nodded, but said, “Maybe we should just ambush them. I’ve been training for combat since I was a little child.”

“So have I, but you don’t need training to sit in a stack of grain. We’re in the deepest corridor of an enemy fortress. Fighting is our last resort. Dig in.”

They began to scoop their way into the grain.

“So why did you rescue me if you don’t want my help?” asked Truanor.

“I already told you.”

“But who cares if they were gonna kill me? You don’t know anything about me.”

“The fact they wanted you in the first place told me something.”

“What do you mean?”

“I’m here looking for annals from the Church of Murder. Radiant Monadists. Killed a lot of people even before the heroin cult blew up. There are a lot of people who’d like to see their records, not least of which are families whose children disappeared when the Church was at its peak. They try to sacrifice good people because they’re the ones who are most pleasing to the Monad or some fucked up shit like that. They were about to sacrifice you, ergo they thought you were a good person. Guess they fucked up.”

“Shut up, fucking pigeon. I already told you I’m not here to push drugs and I wasn’t in the war on Palmgrove! What more do you want?”

“Then why are you here? Enjoying the discount on prostitution that comes with chattel slavery and humanitarian crises?”

“Watch your fucking tongue! I came to protect my cousin, who is here to get heroin! But I’m through with that now!”

“Why?”

“It’s fucking horrible! The world’s turned into a goddamned nightmare ever since I encountered that awful shit.”

They were up to their necks now, with only their hands free to cover their heads with wheat when the moment came.

“Why am I skeptical about the Archzenith nobleman’s sudden change of heart when he needs my help escaping the murder cult? The murder cult he thought he was gonna mooch off of?

“Because I’m a man of honor! I’d fucking tell you if I was still gonna get the heroin!”

“Did you tell the Affidavits what’d happen if they got the heroin?”

Truanor lunged at Bloodroot but they heard footfalls in the corridor and immediately wiggled into the grain, sweeping it over their heads. The door burst open. A guard with a rifle and bayonet leaned in. He poked his bayonet through the grain for a moment, then let the door bang shut. Then he quickly opened it again. Then he closed it and left.

Truanor used a finger to sweep the grain from in front of his mouth.

“I think they’re gone!”

“Shhhh!”

They waited for some time. Finally the footsteps came back down the hallway and continued the way they first came. Bloodroot began to worm his way up and out. Truanor followed suit.

“What do you mean ‘enemy’? We’re on the same side.”

“Ever notice how there’s nothing formal about our alliance? How we have contracts with Diadem, Troutbridge, Ascension etcetera, but not you? Never you? Ever wonder why that is?

“Who cares? Who needs you when a country has its own cohort of gentlemen to carry out its cause?”

“You just don’t get it. Everyone thinks Archzenith’s evil. And having all your artists disappear hasn’t helped.”

“But I’m not involved in any of that!”

“Fine! We’ll see where your loyalties lie once we get out of here! To your newfound, vestigial conscience, or to the gentlemen of Archzenith? Show me! We’ll find out!”

“Well- I’ll show you, cocksucker! I could bust my way out of here no problem, but I said I’d help you find your idiotic paperwork and that’s what I’m gonna do! So you don’t have to take a thing on faith.”

“Fan-fucking-tactic. You come along behind and we’ll see if we can get you into something that’s not a dress uniform’s dress uniform.”

They ran down the hallway in a blur of gray brick, dust curling after their footfalls.

“Those dead priests mentioned a chapel,” said Truanor, “Seems like a good place to start.”

“Fair,” said Bloodroot, sliding to a halt in front of a humble, stained wood door. He fell down on all fours and listened under the crack, and Truanor crowded his ear against the keyhole.

“Monadic patron, eternal saint, bather in lifeblood sacrosanct-“

Bloodroot leapt up and opened the door just enough to slide through with his .45 raised. Truanor followed. It was a humble servant’s quarters, and there was a young man on his knees before a golden orb that rested upon an old chess table at the foot of his rickety timeworn bed. The boy looked up, gaping, and tucked the golden orb into his coat. Bloodroot had the .45 inches from the tip of the young man’s nose.

“Disrobe. After prayers, it’s bedtime.”

The young man said, “Please don’t take my Monad.”

“The Monad’s inside of you, isn’t it? Or something? We’re here for your clothes, not your balls. Strip down and we’ll let you keep the snow globe.”

The servant began to disrobe, and Truanor began pulling his own intricately-donned raiments off piece-by-piece. The servant watched him like he was disassembling a complex 3D puzzle. The servant finished first and stood in his underwear.

Finally Truanor unlaced his oxhide kote and shuffled it down his arms onto the pile of his clothes by his feet. He reached into the heap and withdrew his stiletto, advancing grimly on the servant, who fell back into his bed frame and chess table, knocking the latter to the ground with a clatter, and gave an exhaled squeak of terror.

“Halt! Stay your stiletto!”

Truanor had begun to raise his weapon but Bloodroot had grasped the blade.

“What is it?” he asked.

“We’ve no need to kill him!”

Truanor looked at Bloodroot, then at the servant, then back at Bloodroot.

“What do you mean?”

“I’ll knock him out!”

“But he’ll wake up and tell on us! What do you care? Doesn’t he worship the Devil Sun?”

Bloodroot looked at the servant.

“Have you ever killed anyone?”

“I- I haven’t, lord master sir, b-but if you kill me my soul will go to the Monad.”

“See?” said Truanor.

Bloodroot looked at them both. “I’m gonna let this kid ripen. Sacrifice yourself before you sacrifice others. The Monad will get a bigger meal off you both.” Bloodroot spun the pistol around on his finger, then whipped the handle into the servant’s jaw with a stupendous whack. The boy clattered to the ground, cut across the chin.

“A lesson in sweetness and humanity. Get dressed,” said Bloodroot, holstering his weapon and hoisting the boy into bed.



They stood in a small library off of the ribcage-roofed chapel of the Earl’s fortress. Bloodroot had ripped the pages out of a holy book and substituted them with logs, diaries and annals taken from a darkened Records alcove before binding the booklet in a twine of woven-together bookmark ribbons. Truanor had been thumbing through volumes:

Precosmogonic Gastrosyncretism: Nothing New Before the Sun
The Radiant Schism: Blood Baptism and Sacred Radiation
The Journal of Human Sacrifice: The Thrill of the Divine

“I’ve got thousands of names. Looks like some of them were traded to Radiant sects elsewhere on the planet. Some of them could still be alive. Saved for New Year’s sacrifices.”

“That what you need?”

“That’s what I need.”

A priest in black robes with golden trim opened the door and looked at them.

“Greetings, master. What can your humble servants do for you this day?” asked Truanor.

“Violators!” he breathed angrily, and took a step back.

Truanor dropped his book, rushed the priest, and stuck his stiletto all the way through his chest as he staggered backwards with his hands raised. Truanor’s vicious thrill turned to angry shock as he and the priest bumped into a rifleman who’d been standing behind the priest. Apparently he’d been given a security detail of two soldiers in the wake of the brotherhood’s pruning.

The soldier they’d bumped into was off-balance and tried to unsling his rifle but Truanor put his hand on the man’s shoulder, pinning his the strap in place, and yanked the stiletto from the priest’s sternum, who fell over and grasped the wooden banister of the chapel’s inner cloister.

The soldier grabbed Truanor’s wrist, but he forced the blade into the soldier’s neck anyway; the man leaned into himself and away from Truanor, but Truanor rammed the stiletto through one side of his neck and almost out the other. The spike slid free as the soldier collapsed like a sack of potatoes. There was a tremendous crack that made Truanor jump; the second soldier had crouched a bit and fired his bolt-action rifle into the library with a hint of pressure that Truanor could feel echoing away from him. The soldier was met with a barrage of gunshots from inside the library and collapsed onto his side. He screamed like he’d just lost a fortune, and then was still except for ragged and unprofitable breathing.

Bloodroot emerged from the library hunched up over his pistol, sliding home a new magazine.

“No good deed goes unpunished,” he said and spat red froth onto the flagstone floor.

“You-“

“Bring your ass.” Bloodroot made for the chapel doors with one hand on the bannister, his pistol hanging by his thigh. He had a blood-soaked bullet hole through his left lower back.

“Johannes-“

“How’d you get here? To Setroxia?”

“By seaplane. It’s moored up at the grand canal.”

“Help!” Johannes screamed raggedly, “Help!”

“What are you doing!?”

“Carry me. Help!”

Truanor ran to Johannes and put his arm over his shoulder as they reached the door. Blood was pouring down his chin. They staggered into the hallway and a pair of the Earl’s riflemen ran to them.

“They killed… another priest. They’re in… the library!”

“Right! Wait here!” said one of the soldiers and they crept into the room.

Johannes and Truanor went through the front doors and out towards the gate.

“Gunmen! Gunmen in the chapel! Blasphemers! Seek cover!” yelled Johannes.

They arrived at a gatehouse built into the wall. The wrought iron portcullis was closed; a pair of soldiers were inside a windowed chamber lined with heavy chains to control the gate.

“Carry me in,” said Johannes. Trunaor pushed open the door and they staggered into the guard post.

“Keep him out of here! He goes to the Monad, can’t you see that? Out!”

Johannes drew his .45 and shot the man in the heart. The other fell into a crouch and tried to get below a table. Johannes shot him in the side, then sent a bullet through the back of his hand and into his brain. The man slowly extended on the floor like a caterpillar.

The room now smelled of gunpowder and blood. The man who was shot in the heart was sitting on a records-making table with an expression of disbelief; he seized his chest as if he was having a heart attack, grimaced, then slid into a heavy faint on the floorboards.

“Open the gate,” rasped Johannes.

Truanor found a crankwheel and wound it with all his might until the portcullis had opened enough for them to bow through.

Johannes selected a submachine gun from a rusty, cobwebbed weapons rack and began lining his waistband with magazines like he was making a grass skirt.

Johannes came to Truanor and pulled him roughly into his side, wrapping an arm over the back of Truanor’s neck.

“Make for the nearest alley. They’ll be a hell of a lot easier to deal when they’re not on home turf.”

Truanor carried Johannes into the courtyard. Laborers and scribes were approaching the guardhouse to see what had happened; Johannes fired indiscriminately just over their heads and they rushed for cover, screaming for the guards. Truanor carried his charge out into the dusty open ground that lay fifty feet between the Earl’s walls and the nearest buildings; he expected to receive a rifle round just as Bloodroot had but they made it into an alleyway without gunfire. Truanor was elated to have escaped the fortress despite the wound of his companion

“Let me down!” said Johannes. Truanor slid away from him. Johannes advanced gingerly down the alleyway.

“Alright! I can walk! I have a surgeon, but there’s no way in hell I’m going to lead you anywhere near him. You’d give him up under torture, just as I would. He’s not far from here; you are going to take this and get it to a Starling & Shrike office!” Johannes pulled the book he’d assembled out of his belt and thrust it into Truanor’s arms, who almost dropped it.

“What! No! There’s no way I’m letting you walk through these alleys alone, least of all after I got attacked doing just that!”

“I don’t need you when I’ve got all this!” Johannes gestured to his submachine panoply. “Go get on that seaplane right now!”

“I won’t do it! I’m not going to leave you after what you just did!”

Johannes drew his silver .45 pistol and placed it underneath his own jaw, just above his Adam’s apple. It gleamed in the midday sun.

“Then I’m leaving you. You’re taking that book and getting out of here. That’s the best bet for it. I’ll take time to recover. Time that this city might not have. You’re taking that book and you’re flying out of here right now. One way or another.”

Truanor slapped the pistol out from under Johannes’ jaw, but he said, “Fine, you crazy asshole! Mr ‘I’ve got to be a hero and go it alone’. Go it alone! See what happens! I’ll tell the pigeon brass to not get their hopes up for you!”

“Do that,” grinned Johannes with bloody teeth and hobbled away up the alleyway.

“Fucking psychopath. I hope I see that guy again,” Truanor said to himself.

He jogged through the alleyways until he came into the square of the grand temple of the Orthodoxy of Opiates. There on the front step was his cousin, still in grand Archzenith raimentry, speaking with a group of men in hooded robes of rough brown wool, each carrying a poppy-shaped staff with an incense brazier for a head and a long, heated hypodermic needle poking from the top.

“Castor, are we finished?” Truanor called as he came near the gathering.

“Ah. My cousin Truanor. Please humor him. Cousin, have you gone native? What’s become of your Hightower Colors?”

“Nevermind that, suffice to say this is not a place to wander. Are we going?”

“You gave up your Colors to street urchins?”

“No! I fought like a Hightower! But my cyan blood would be stained in the streets of Setroxia had I gone on as I was! Are we leaving?”

“No, we are not leaving. It will be several days until the heroin is ready. But the priests have graciously offered us lodging in the temple.” He grinned.

“I’ll wait for you by the canal. I cannot stand the dryness of this place. I’ll sleep on the stones of the water trough wall if I must. But I won’t go in that temple.”

“Oh, but you will,” said Castor sternly, “You abandoned me when you swore to protect me and you lost the colors of House Hightower, something we swore as boys never to do! The days of your naive insolence are over! You’ve proven yourself unfit to wander freely and now you’ll be kept under lock and key until I bring you home to Archzenith where you’ll answer for your failures as a man, a warrior and a Hightower!”

The priests were uneasy and began to lower their glowing needle-staffs towards Truanor.

Truanor closed his eyes, looked down and then leapt backwards through the air, drawing his machine pistol. As soon as he hit the ground he gripped it mightily with two hands and rode it bucking across the heroin priests. He cut them down in puffs of protruding fabric before the last one stabbed Truanor through the arm with his needle, pouring glowing coals of incense over him at the same time; all Truanor felt was a dull ache and a sear as if someone’s fingernails had been raked down his arm. Truanor shot the priest once in the center of the chest and he collapsed, screaming tightly. Truanor drew down on his cousin with the needle-staff still poking through his arm. Castor had just drawn his .44 magnum but hadn’t quite got it on Truanor yet.

“Drop it,” breathed Truanor. Castor gazed at him with livid eyes; he wasn’t sure if Truanor would do it and was studying him with the greatest intensity. Truanor began to squeeze the trigger. Castor dropped the weapon and stepped back with his hands raised.

“Aaaaaugh! Aaaaaaugh!” screamed the priest who’d been shot in the chest.

Truanor could hear his straining heartbeat around the hypodermic staff, the point of which poked bloodlessly from Truanor’s arm. He kept his handgun trained on his cousin and yanked the staff free with a strange sensation like having a tooth pulled. He got up, advanced, seized the .44, tucked it into his coat and began to walk backward towards the canal.

“You’ll never escape. Never,” said Castor.

“Then hope I don’t take you with me when I die,” hissed Truanor. As soon as he was a hundred meters away, Castor turned and sprinted up the stairs into the temple. Truanor didn’t fire; he turned and began his run for the canal.

Truanor arrived at the barbed wire in just a few minutes, ragged and sweating. The soldiers saw him coming, scowled at him and waved him away.

“No water for the likes of you, cockroach! Go drink out of a donkey’s asshole!”

“I’m a noble of Archzenith! Clear the wire before my next heartbeat or this city will go the way of Palmgrove!”

“Ah, shit, yes, I recognize you sir! Help me move this!” called the soldier and a few came to pull it out of the way. As soon as it was opened a few inches Truanor dodged through it and made for the seaplane at a dead run. The soldiers doffed their vast hats to him as he passed.

He leapt up onto the wall of the canal and ran to the seaplane, jumping onto its pontoon and soaking his thin felt shoes. The pilot was sleeping on the floor of the seaplane wrapped up in a thick blanket; he poked his eyes blearily over his cover at the disturbance.

Truanor wrenched the door open. “Start the plane! We’re going! We’re going right now!”

“W- where is master Castor, sir?”

“He stays! Get up!”

The pilot pushed the blanket off of him and struggled to pull himself up with the nearest seats.

“Are we in danger, master Truanor? Such a rush, I note.”

“Don’t worry about that! Do as you’re charged, man!”

The pilot sat down at the controls. Truanor glanced back at the street where he’d come and saw Castor run into view with his rapier drawn. Dozens of armed retainers from some Setroxian nobleman followed behind him.

“Move! Move now!” Truanor hissed at the pilot, who looked over his shoulder as he started the propeller with a bang and a whir.

“Master! What’s the meaning of this? There’s your cousin Castor with a whole platoon of soldiers!”

Truanor drew his pistol and put it to the back of the man’s neck. It was still warm.

“Fly.”

The pilot took a deep breath and opened the throttle. The plane began pushing forward across the perfectly-still water. Castor and the soldiers had cleared the wire behind them.

Truanor swallowed, put his face in his palms for a moment, and then looked up at them resignedly. The soldiers would begin firing in moments. The plane would be riddled with bullets. Escape was very unlikely.

The soldiers leveled their rifles at the plane. Truanor squeezed a backrest, preparing for the barrage. Then Castor raised his rapier in front of their rifles and bade them halt with delight; he pointed his sword up in the air, towards the city’s great statue.

Truanor looked up as well. The torso of the black statue was rotating slowly; the enormous ruby that covered its eye was coming into view.

That’s what Castor had meant. He’d never escape.

The pilot looked up and followed Truanor’s gaze.

“It’s the superweapon,” he said, his voice breaking. “I think we’d better cut off the engine, sir.”

Truanor looked at the ruby. It was beginning to glow with an inner fire, an unnatural light divorced from the sun, which was held off by a halo of darkness ringing the ruby’s edge.

Truanor didn’t answer. He simply watched the gathering light with bitterness and pushed the pistol deeper into the pilot’s neck.

After a few moments, he whispered to himself,

“This has been worth it. I go to glory in a story that may never be told, but my actions will sit right among the ancestors. If I am a piece of a great consciousness, I have maintained its integrity here. Forgive me the life of this pilot. He is my only regret.”

The ruby began to glow like a second sun. It burned a purple light into Truanor’s eye that lingered even when he closed it, as he could look at it no longer. The seaplane lifted off from the water. It grew devastatingly hot inside of the compartment; both noble and pilot grimaced and squeezed whatever was nearest, curling into themselves.

There was an enormous vibrating noise like an earthquake in the air around them. It was deafening and the seaplane shook like it would undo its own bolts. This was it!

But the vibration relented, though the sound intensified. Truanor looked up and behind him, heart hammering, sweat standing upon his brow. There was an enormous wall of light behind the plane, so bright and hot he could barely gaze upon it, but he forced himself to, thrusting himself into the back of the plane, deciding to sacrifice his vision if need be to understand what it was he was seeing.

A vast beam of sun-bright light stood between the ruby and the canal below! The beam was raking its way up the canal, leaving nothing but whirling clouds of pulverized stone and glowing metal snakes where the barbed wire had been! The statue was annihilating the whole canal zone.

The light beam scorched and crushed everything until the end of the canal, then suddenly narrowed and shut off just before it would have destroyed the nearest house. Truanor tried to make out signs of life near the canal; he could only catch glimpses of corpses that were laying near the devastation. Those not obliterated by the massive beam were presumably killed by the heat.

Truanor put his fist upon the hot window and leaned against it.

He murmured, “Cousin, I am a fool, for I cannot but hope you made it clear.”

“Did- did they miss?” yelped the pilot, whose arms and knees were quaking violently.

They were flying up level with the statue’s head and Truanor was gazing at it. He could see behind the steaming ruby, through the empty eye and into the head itself. It was a control room with levers, and it was blanketed with bloody corpses and men who were still writhing from gunshot wounds or shrapnel. Johannes Bloodroot was sitting against the controls, his clothes torn up and stained by half a dozen gunshot wounds. Johannes saw them fly by and raised his submachine gun overhead with one hand before he disappeared from view.

“No,” said Truanor hoarsely, “It was a friend of mine. He hit exactly what he was aiming at.”



They touched down in the bay of Mandrake, a city-state famed as a refuge for exiled noblemen. The Archzenites called it the world’s outhouse. Truanor would call it home.

They motored through a watertop forest of mangroves towards Mandrake’s innumerable wooden docks of every elevation and state of repair. Several times they were nearly ensnared on vines, roots and kudzu, but they made it to a dock and were approached by a man in suspenders and a newsboy cap. He chewed a burned-out cigar for a moment, then called out,

“You mooring?”

“Just dropping off,” said Truanor, stepping onto the pontoon. The man pushed his cigar into the water with his tongue, which he extended far past his lips, then turned on his heel and walked back to shore.

Truanor turned to the pilot.

“Please accept my apologies. I put your life in great danger, and now you’ll have to face my family once you get back to Archzenith.”

The pilot’s face showed gratitude despite the truth of what Truanor had said.

“What do I tell them, master Truanor?” he asked quietly.

“Tell them that I wanted the best for the House, but that it would stain my soul as a Hightower to have participated in this affair. Tell them that to maintain my honor as a Hightower, I must leave the House itself, perhaps forever. Tell my mother and sisters that I love them, and tell my father that I have done this of my own volition, and that I step forward upon a new and darkling path with the blood of our line in my mind and my veins.” He smiled. “And tell them that I put a gun to your head, if you think that will help. Some of them won’t care. But some might.”

The pilot nodded.

“I wish you luck,” he said quietly.

“Thank you,” said Truanor, clasping the pilot’s arm, and then walked down the jetty to Mandrake.



Truanor stood at the edge of a muddy street. Sweating stevedores, outrageously ostentatious noblemen and their retinues, stray dogs, donkey carts, and even a tracked motorcar passed behind him

He’d reached his destination. It was a whitewashed stoneblock house with a black tile roof. The building was stained with mud around the base, and cigarettes had been put out here and there upon the wall. There was a sign hanging from the building that read “Starling & Shrike”.

Truanor had Bloodroot’s book in his hand. He knocked and a Starling & Shrike Contracting Officer in black and white opened the door.

“My name is Truanor Hightower of Archzenith. One of your agents, Johannes Bloodroot, grave his life to save my life in the city of Setroxia. He had one final request, which I’ve come to fulfill. May I come in?”

Thursday, June 3, 2021

The Crimes of Jack Daw

Summary: This is a short story set in Solomon VK’s city-state of Saxherm, which my Weird Fiction City-State Generator helped play a part in conceptualizing. This is a tale of greed and reckoning. What part of you would win out if you lost your memories? Your conscience? Or your id?

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Jack awoke to a blade of light across the eyes. He felt a mountain of weight upon his belly, and he glanced down onto the golden part of a head of hair that was laid upon his chest. He glanced out of the second-story pitching hole of the barn he slept in. The bounteous prairie was bathed in the morning dew. Jack crooked his neck away from a shoot of hay that was poking it and stretched his limbs with a quiver to shame a rattlesnake before remembering himself. 

“Dear, dear, the hospitality of you simple country folk,” he said, giving the young woman’s hair a sniff. She was sleeping deep, all swaddled in the salmon-colored dress which Jack had lifted up the night before after espying her making daisy crowns at the edge of her family’s property and approaching her for a lesson. He still wore his crown and planned to keep it, but he knew he’d have to lose his shirt, which she was gripping deeply by its wide-open lapel.

“I’m named for a bird but I’m more like a fish, my dear, of which your cat will attest,” he whispered, slipping himself with utter dexterity from his loose white shirt; guard, thug and farmgirl all had felt Jack Daw slip his shirt and alight from a trap half-sprung.

“A memento of our love, my dear; smell it well,” he whispered as he crouched, making a religious sign over her hand which grasped the shirt.

He lay on the boards and peeked out the barn’s pitching hole. A ruddy, big-bellied man with ham-hock hands and a submachine gun slung and bouncing from his body was stalking through the dewy grass to Jack’s abode in the barn. He wore trousers on suspenders, a sleeveless white shirt and a loose sash with crossed hoes and rifles. A Brother of the Armed Ploughmen! 

“Perhaps if I find a gun they’ll let me join them now, eh, my pear?” Jack whispered to the snoring farm girl.

Jack caught a whiff of bacon on the breeze from the large whitewashed farmhouse which the man had emerged from.

“Breakfast! I’m not so rude as to snuff the hostess’s cooking… I shall have to time this perfectly if I’m to be served.”

As soon as the big man disappeared around the corner of the barn, Jack leapt from the wooden sill, landing on the wet, cool grass below and immediately rolled over his side three or four times with the grace of an acrobat before springing to his feet with the momentum of his landing. Several years ago this would have greatly hurt his legs, but Jack was an old hand at such departures at this point. 

He raced through the open, sparing only a glance over his shoulder to be sure the hulking farmer hadn’t turned around. Jack dove through the parallel wooden planks that made up the farmhouse’s inner fence, more for fun than anything, and rushed to the kitchen door, making an eight-foot slide on his knees through the slick grass before coming to a halt against the whitewashed wall. Jack peered through the lace-lined door window and saw a large, well-appointed kitchen where a woman in a longsleeved black gown was peeling potatoes. He could hear sizzling from a pan inside: perfect cover. Jack opened the door with a single finger upon the brass handle.

“My dear, I shan’t deprive you of the hearty tubers of peonage, it’s that fatty ploughman’s share that my tummy agrees upon this morning…”

He slipped into the kitchen with more grace than a hunter and crept behind the woman like a daddy longlegs.

There was a thick loaf of fresh hardbread sitting on a wooden counter island in the center of the room and Jack took this, tearing it open down the middle but was careful not to rip it in two. He could smell the soft rich white bread within, and thought, “Oh, for rural prosperity!” 

He sidled beside a cast iron skillet that was frying bacon over a split log fire beneath a chimney. They were becoming crispy around pockets of creamy fat.

“Perfection! I cannot abide the thought of these burning…”

He picked up the pan with a dishrag and poured it, grease and all, into the guts of the bread he’d torn open for just this purpose. He glanced at the woman with a look of appreciation before noticing what lay by her knees: jugs of fresh mead in a cabinet below the countertop! Our simian patriarch is an apiarist! Jack exclaimed with inward admiration.

I shall have to violate my own code of good conduct and discretion for a jug of Mrs Rasher’s kneeside reserve! Forgive me, lady of the house, for startling you while you’re peeling potatoes!

Jack stood up, walked up behind her, and rumbled, “‘Scuse me dearie.” She moved to the side without looking up and Jack reached down and withdrew a hefty jug of mead from the lower shelf. It was wrapped in beeswaxed butcher paper with a great bee over crossed pitchfork and shotgun stamped upon it.

“Don’t you think it’s a little early-”

She glanced at him and went pale, her mouth forming a great dark O.

“Never for your cooking, my dear,” smiled Jack and sprinted from the kitchen.

There was a hoarse scream behind him as he blew through the door. He saw the beefy farmer by the barn dragging his daughter out in a headlock, holding the submachine gun in one hand.

“Unhand her, knave, and you may save your breakfast!” yelled Jack and then sprinted for the corner of the house. The farmer raised his submachine gun with one hand and opened fire, pockmarking his wall with bullets as Jack executed a perfect sliding turn and disappeared around the corner, sailing across the daisies with bread and mead jug underneath his arms like a thief of babies, making for the woodline wearing a grin of mad elation.


Jack stood at the edge of the woods gazing upon the rolling spires of Saxherm, city of the hills.

“Oh, my jewels, my crown of darkling jewels, how I yearn for you to suck me into your curves like a lusty mote on a goddess of birth!” 

He reached down and stretched, warm and happy after his morning calisthenics and the rich breakfast that had followed. He still had half a jug of mead and expected he could make it last until he cleared the city gates.

Whistling merrily, he set off and eventually found a path across the bread-soft rolling furrow-fields that he knew must lead to Saxherm. It wandered through tree tunnels hung with charms to ward off ill intent, little scrimshaw ingots and figures dedicated to the gods that protected the city’s laymen and farmers. Jack plucked these down as he walked and strung them into a broad necklace which he laid just above his shoulders. 

Jack strutted into the lowest quarter of Terracetunnel Hill like a plumeless peacock and gazed about him with deep satisfaction at the bustle of crowds and carts as they clattered over the cobblestones.

“I need a bankroll!” he declared roundly to the nearest passerbys, who wore a variety of foreign garb and domestic Saxherm professional iconography. They glanced at him uneasily and he gave them a winning smile. “You need a shirt,” one of them chided him. 

“I want a shirt,” he said to no one in particular.

Jack strolled down the street, charms clattering merrily from where he’d slung them. He leapt up and grabbed a hanging phlebotomist’s sign and pulled himself up onto the cast-iron crossbar which held it aloft, balancing like a gymnast and gazed around the street. People glanced up at him, some with annoyance, others with interest. 

He saw that one of the cross streets wound to a statue garden; perfect! Jack would find his way among the other patricians of this world who must be taking their ease in this bright, balmy morning!

Jack alighted from his post and whistled as he slipped his way through the workaday crowd. Sure enough, there in the square was a richly-appointed man on horseback; he wore a black coat hemmed in gold, white trousers and shining black riding boots that reached his thighs. He doffed a felt-covered pith helmet with a jaunty brim as he spoke with a smile to a pair of well-pedigreed ladies in pastel dresses and enormous hats who stood below with looping greyhounds on leather leashes. 

That gent would have some coin to spare! Jack ducked into an alley where a young bellhop in a tweed jacket and cap was having a smoke. Jack approached him.

“Spare a stick, prefect?”
The young man looked Jack up and down with contempt.
“Fuck outta here, jerkoff.”

Jack whipped a fist across the bellhop’s jaw, sending his cigarette spinning into the depths of the alley. Jack caught him by the lapels as he fell and laid him gently behind a little staircase that led up to one of the buildings. If anyone had seen the strike from the street, they weren’t making a fuss. Jack slipped off the boy’s tweed coat and donned it, picked up the hat from where it was laying on the stones and donned that too, went and got the cigarette and placed it in the young man’s snoring lips.

Jack swept off the hat and bowed. “Thank you for making that easier on me, old boy.”

He donned the hat again and made for the garden, walking between the statues, alternatingly ghoulish and gargoylish and cherubic, these being the quarter’s traditional spiritual overlords. They were hung with garlands, painted with harlequin makeup, and had roses tossed around their feet and such. Passerbies deviated through the garden on their way here and there, running their fingertips across stone horns, swords and tablets of law. 

The horseman was approaching the edge of the crowd now and was about to re-enter the street. Jack appraised him keenly. There! He had a seam in the heel of his boot, which was clad in the golden-framed furniture of a long rolling spur. This was a common way to secret funds for emergency bribery and the like. 

Jack sauntered up behind him and extended a hand. There was likely to be a latch in the front of the heel or some such. The man glanced down and then back, his eyes narrowing and darkening at Jack. Jack began rubbing the horse’s haunch.

“Such a beauty,” he smiled. The man withdrew his boot from its stirrup and launched a kick at Jack’s face, who ducked it with a momentary loosening of the knees and a smooth quickstep backwards.

“M’lord!”  said Jack, “‘Twas but a gesture of affection for this mighty beast!”

The man stepped down from the horse, his short black velvet cloak sliding from the rich, scrollworked leather saddle. He strode around the back of his horse, brushed by its tail, and drew a double-length straight-backed dagger with a wicked tang from a gold-trimmed lined scabbard. His cloak had patterns of gold coins stacked on scales woven into it; a marker of his profession, some kind of pure financier. 

Jack fell to his knees and said with breathy weakness,

“Sir! I am your humble servant! Your slave!”

People glanced at the scene, sucking their teeth or shaking their head, but nobody stopped.

“You like my horse, then, do you, worm?” the man growled.

“Y-yes milord, but it is you who I most fear and adore!”

“What shall we do about your impertinence, then? You are nothing, I am everything. You aren’t fit to shovel Seasong’s turds, urchin.”

The man laid the blade of his knife just below Jack’s ear like this was some kind of criminal knighting. People began to give them a wide berth.

“Sir, I am a worm. Please allow me to kiss your feet with all Saxherm as my witness, your serving man and footstool from now until the grave takes me from you!” 

“I don’t want your service,” he smiled, “but you may kiss my feet, knave.”

Jack placed his palms on the cobblestones and leaned his face near the man’s boots. People were stopping to watch, making quiet expressions of amusement, contempt or pity. 

Jack snapped his knees to his chest and grabbed the man’s spur in a single instantaneous motion, departing the cobblestones for a split second. He launched himself skyward with all his might, wrenching the man from the ground, tearing his trousers open at the crotch as he did so. The knife clattered on the cobblestones and the man grimaced redly as his helmet bounced off the ground. Holding the golden spur, Jack deftly stabbed a finger into the little latch that ran along the man’s heel which popped off instantly along with a fat gold coin that Jack slapped out of the air and into a pocket with one motion

“You-“ the man roared, but Jack cut him off with a wrenching of the ankle. The man screamed, and all the gaping faces around them gave an enormous wince. Jack leapt atop the saddle, kicked the horse in the ribs and yelled, “Yah!”

It took off sprinting through the crowd and people lurched out of the way. This was an unnecessary flourish, he probably could have walked away from the brutal scene with his just desserts, but Jack preferred the crowd’s gaping wonder to its tacit approval.


Jack arrived outside House Draper, an elite couturier serving Saxherm’s rich and famous. He dismounted the horse before it had stopped and wove its reins around a lamppost. He took off the coat after removing a pack of cigarettes and a few copper coins from the pocket and threw it in the gutter. Then he strode past the bay windows which were crisscrossed with wood and walked in through the front doors. He came to a stop on the broad wooden floor, taking in the scent of oiled leather and quality fabric.
An anxious tailor came over to him. The man was wearing an electric blue blazer, black slacks and a raspberry cravat. He bent slightly at the waist and asked Jack,
“Sir, may I start you with a shirt or shall I call the guards?”

“Yes, a shirt, but I’m actually picking up,” said Jack, “I ordered a sash a few days ago and it must be ready by now, mustn’t it? The name was Lord Candledish.”

“I shall check, sir,” the man said with a grimace and went to a locked cabinet underneath the windows. People passed blurrily by and Jack could see the brown smudge of his hijacked horse. 

The tailor unlocked a drawer, drew out a sheaf of receipts, and looked through them using a pair of lenses mounted on his nose.

“Hmm, yes, right here,” he glanced a Jon, “May I see your payment, Lord Candledish?”

Jack drew the thick gold coin with a flourish, whirling it through his fingers like a playing card.

“Ah! Yes, of course my lord, please forgive my manners!” said the tailor, giving a deep bow, “I shall retrieve your sash at once!” He unlocked an enormous arched armoire and drew out a long, black, silk and cashmere sash. It had images of lockpicks woven into it with silver thread, a tradition in Saxherm; the professional wears representations of the tools of his trade.

“And a shirt for the master?” asked the tailor.

“Mmm… something white with lots of ruffles.”

“Yes, my lord.” The tailor found a white shirt that was striped ever so subtly with thread-thin silver pinstripe and had loose ruffles around the cuffs and open collar. 

“That will do. Grace me with it, young man,” said Jack to the tailor who must have been twenty years his senior. The man slid it gracefully onto Jack, who tucked it into his snug black trousers, leaving the collar open and letting some excess fabric billow over his belt. Then he carefully draped the lockpick sash over Jack’s neck, and it came to rest about his shoulder and hip.

Jack sashayed to a spinning mirror that reached the ceiling.

“Hah! I look like a goddamned Starling pigeon! The irony.”

He drew out the coin and flipped it through the air to the tailor, who caught it with both hands cupped in the air and held it up briefly before bringing it to a strongbox chained to a countertop.

“I will bring you your change, sir.”

“No need, my boy. This will be the beginning of a long relationship between you and I. Buy a necklace for your lady or catamite. But I expect that you will entertain special requests in the future,” Jack gave the man a meaningful glance.
“Yes, of course, my lord,” said the tailor, bowing his head.
“I’m off!” Jack declared and strode into the street without another word, standing outside the shop with his hands on his hips, gazing up and down the street with immense pride. A man was looking through the window, and asked,

“You a locksmith?”

“The finest,” Jack grinned and breezed past him, mounting the horse and undoing the tether with a whip of the hand.


Jack rode through a long covered promenade that served as one of the city’s tacit black markets. Shops sat deep into the walls and the place was thronged with unsavory or desperate characters making deals which they ground out like they were clawing through brick with their fingernails.

Jon rode up to his favorite fence, a patrician hobbyist from the Vineforest principalities. The man was sitting in an enormous leaned-back armchair, had an onyx cane with a livid, ornate golden handle, and wore a sea captain’s cap. He was letting a handrolled cigarette languish at the end of a long cinnabar smoking stick; Jack smelled clove in his tobacco.

“I brought you this because I know how you love the races!” Jack called as he clopped through the murky thoroughfare.

The man grinned with the smoking stick clenched in his teeth.

“How hot is she?”

Jack stood up on the horse’s back like a circus boy.

“Hot as hell! This is as close to her as I can stand to be!”

“Any bodies on her?”

“None but my own, though I did toss a lord ass over teakettle in my haste to take a turn on her!”

“Alrighty,” said the fence, “I’m glad you didn’t cut the saddle loose, that thing’s worth more than you’d think. Take her to the stable on the Leopard Park side of the building and tell them Hermit sent you. I’ll count you out some silver, sound good?”

Jack bowed. It was a different name with each of this man’s associates.

“We go hand in hand into paradise.”


Jack sat in Bistro Chevalier, which was situated in the apex spike of a tower at the very highest cluster atop Terracetunnel Hill, some of the finest real estate in Saxherm. This place was frequented by the city’s rich and its gentleman thieves alike, who loved to hobknob and rub elbows, discussing grand heists and cons across the world. Jack was neither rich nor a gentleman thief, but he looked the part as he sat with his feet up on a voluminous cherry table, his boots rumpling the gleaming tablecloth as he smoked one of the earthy cigarettes he’d taken from the bellhop. This was not so incongruous for this place; thieves, footpads and highwaymen leaned, stretched and sprawled throughout the room, accompanied by adoring industrialists and real estate traders.
 
Jack ordered a stein of wine, a rack of lamb with mint sauce and chutney, a burbling chocolate fondue with apples and a fresh-baked boysenberry tart that had been filled with chilled cheesecake.

Jack cut slices of lamb as he watched the chocolate burble over the rim of its high saucer, spilling in ropes over the glossy skin of the apples below. He picked up the tart in his hand, held it to his nose and inhaled deeply and lustily.

A group of scarred, tattooed men in dark coats had been seated at the table adjacent to his. He recognized this crew; a new gang of dangerous thugs known as the Marlinspikes. Thieves’ guilds and street gangs were generally disallowed by the powers that be in Saxherm, who loved the enterprise and daring of the thieves but didn’t want any organized criminality in the city besides its ubiquitous black markets.

The fate of this fraternity was yet to be determined; they were led by a fearsome creature of nightmare, the brutal strongarm robber Ondrata Anaconda of Sarabande. This hulking, lumbering murderer was said to be unkillable; he had survived many street struggles and bore enormous scars that would have marked mortal wounds on normal men. He was absent now, which was a relief to Jack because Ondrata enjoyed brutalizing other criminals. This was considered a suicidal activity among normal thieves, the underworld being so prone to revenge murders, but Ondrata seemed to be immune to the harshest punishment.

The gang was speaking quietly and solemnly amongst themselves. Jack stopped moving and listened.

“What the Anaconda says goes, unless you feel like getting your head twisted off and used for a butt scrubber. Doesn’t matter if he’s superstitious; they sacrifice fucking kings and queens where he’s from. Humor him, ok? We’ll take more off this gig than we’ll ever miss from the donative.”

“No gig is sure, what I’m sayin. If this goes south we’ll be swingin in the wind. No cash for bribes or bail, nothing to get us smuggled out of town.”

“There’s always more cash. We’ll be fine. We’ll go to fuckin war in the streets if we have to.”

A third cut in.
“You know what I think he’s thinkin? Maybe he wants to make a donation, but maybe he wants to make sure we don’t have anything to fall back on so it’s do or die. Like generals who burn their ships so their boys can’t retreat.”

“Admirals are the ones who have ships, dumbass. Where’s this thing goin down?”

“We’re gonna have a ‘ritual’ at Sphinxmirror Shrine tonight at midnight. Priest’s gonna officiate. Then we bounce.”

“So we’re just gonna leave it there?”

“Yeah. And if you hold out your cut, you know Anaconda’s gonna pull your nasty ballsack off and smother you with it. Human sacrifice.”

“I get the picture. I’ll have my cash. Doesn’t mean I gotta like it.”

“So who won the chariot race?”

Jack’s heart was racing. This was every thief’s dream: robbing the donation vault of some rich temple. But this shrine wasn’t locked away somewhere. It was basically a wooden box in a back alley somewhere. These guys were on a heist and they’d decided to make a sacrifice first like a bandit tribe before the raid.
Jack needed that cash more than the Mirror Sphinx did. He was there.


Jack waited until two in the morning. He didn’t know how long this ritual would last and he couldn’t risk running into the Marlinspikes. The priest, well, Jack hoped he’d be reasonable about the situation.

Finally Jack came creeping through the shadows like a cat on the hunt. He peered over a rotten, broken-down settee and saw the shrine. It was deserted. He moved closer, edging against the walls.

The shrine was a large, yellow box with blood red trim. The side was open and it had a curtain hanging in front of a set of tin platters for incense. There was a mirror behind everything in the shrine. Jack stopped dead and his heart began to pound. There was a large pile of gold coins on a tiny wooden platform at the heart of the shrine. Jon would have to take this shirt off and use it as a satchel. No problem. He’d be wiping his bottom with these shirts now.

He crept forward to the shrine. He knelt. No lie! It was a pile of gold! He leapt up silently and began dancing a jig, careful to slide his feet without raising them.

“You at one with the Mirror Sphinx or something?” came a cynical drawl.

Jack leapt now, suddenly electrified with adrenaline. He whirled around on the alleyway and saw the Marlinspikes emerging from stoops and piles of trash.

Jack knew that this was very, very bad news, but for what it was worth, Ondrata Anaconda was not present. 

Jack said, “You want me to empty my pockets into the shrine, you just say so.”

“You got a horse in there?”

A thug in a ragged stevedore’s coat with nothing but a sauce-stained scarf beneath it stepped forward. He had stitchmarks and distorted tattoos across his chest and belly, and his shaggy, greasy black hair was bound atop his head with twine.

“No, but I can tell you where to find it,” Jack said carefully.

“The horse ain’t shit. What’s important in this town is peace of mind. You know why the Marlins ain’t gotten squeezed out yet, bird boy?”

“No.”

“Cause we can give the high and mighty peace of mind. They call me Mastiff. Know why?”

“Why.”

“Cause I’m somebody’s attack dog. Ondrata. Lord Carver. Don’t matter. I know there’s a pecking order in this town and I know how to get right up near the top of it. But you, you, Jackie boy, you put your beak where it don’t belong.”

“So what’s next?” 

He shrugged.

“We spring the trap.”

The thugs advanced in on Jack. They seemed to form a wall of lean, hard, leather-clad bodies in the darkness. Jack grimaced and took a step backwards. He turned away from them and slid a hand into his pocket. When they were feet away he whipped his hand out and threw silver coins into their faces; he saw them bounce, shimmering in the wan moonlight. A few of the thugs winced and slowed, but the other half rushed into Jack, who was almost bowled over in the crash of bodies, legs and fists, smelling leather and rank, unwashed wool. He swung and caught one of them across his stubbly cheek, but then one of them slugged him in the gut. He felt like he’d been cut in half and took a step backwards. Another one punched him hard in the temple and he staggered to the side, nearly tripping on their feet. His momentum carried him into the shrine, which he leaned on for a split second. Hands fell on his shirt and tore him away from it, his fingers popping off its corner, and he felt blows being rained all over him. He tried to swing but they caught his arms; he was tasting blood. One of them body-slammed him and he fell sidelong; their boots rained into his body. It didn’t hurt; each impact was like a splash, a register of force

Jack fell onto his back as they stood over him for a moment, their bodies silhouetted against the bone-white clouds. Then one of them knelt over Jack, placed a hand on his chest, and hammered a knife into Jack’s eye. The blade cut through the bottom of his eye and eyelid and deep into his head, blasting a path through to just above his gums. Jack felt this; it was like receiving the mightiest punch that had ever been thrown. The man raised the knife out and dropped a perfunctory second blow through Jack’s cheek, which scraped across his molars and jabbed deep into the back of his mouth, and then a third blow into Jack’s neck, across the esophagus just above the collarbone.

Then the man stood up and wiped the knife on his own trousers. Jack could see who it was in the moonlight: Mastiff. 

One of the gang spat on him, then they gathered up their coins from the shrine and departed. One of them kicked Jack in the head on the way out but he barely felt it.

The cobblestones were strangely comfortable. Jack felt like he needed to stay right there on top of them no matter what. He felt incredibly weak, helpless and desperate.

Every time he tried to look anywhere except straight up he was wracked with agony, like he was worsening his wounds. He could breathe by holding the blood out of his windpipe with his tongue. He siphoned it up and it poured down his cheeks. 

Jack decided it would be easier to breathe if he rolled onto his side. With splitting agony and weakness in his neck, he pushed himself onto his side. His body was severely bruised, perhaps bones were broken, but they hadn’t stabbed him anywhere else and it was easier than he’d expected. Blood gushed from his mouth onto the cobblestones between him and the shrine.

He wanted to see himself. To see his eye, which was blind at the moment. He reached under his head with a hand and pushed himself up enough to see into the mirror in the shrine.

The mirror was clouded in darkness. There were twelve gleaming crystalline eyes in a circle looking at him, and they narrowed in turn as his face came level with the mirror.

Jack’s eyes went wide in half-felt agony.

A voice spoke in Jack’s head with his own voice.

“You have forgotten me, man of Saxherm, but I will help you remember. I will make you forget everything of less importance than my blessing and counsel.”

“No, wait,” Jack said, but the eyes seemed to spin into an infinitely fast whirl that made his stomach churn and his head grow light. Finally his world was obliterated by a screaming wall of force that consumed gravity, time and memory. He floated naively in the void of whirling light, trying but unable to recover what he had known moments before. All became flat, compressed, silent, an objective vision of asensate emptiness.


Jack came back to himself facing the shrine, laying on his side on the deadly-hard cobblestones. The dawn had not broken, but it was heralded by the lavender light now tinging the sky above the gothic arches and stiletto-spires of this city.

He was in agony. Had he fallen from a building? Had he been hit by a shotgun blast?

He grimaced deeply as someone shook his arm with a tight, bony grip.

“I’m alive,” Jack slurred through a maimed and blood-encrusted mouth. He felt like his head was going to explode and he was desperately dehydrated.

“Who did this to you?” came the voice of an old man like the creaking of a Davenport.

Jack thought. He couldn’t remember. He couldn’t remember anything. He cast his mind back in panic. He could remember his mother. He could remember a dark, amber-lit room.

At least there’s that.

“Can’t… think,” said Jack. He wanted to say ‘remember,’ but it was beyond him.

“Ah,” said the old man. He shuffled around to Jack’s front. He wore a long, sky-colored robe that ran over the cobblestones. His beard billowed past it like a cloud, though he had a bald pate.

The man knelt and looked at Jack’s face. 

“You’ve been stabbed. Several times, by the looks of it. You may die.”

Anguish consumed Jack’s heart. The priest studied him intently and his face hardened.

“The men who stabbed you. What would you do to them if you were healthy and they were standing before you, disarmed and vulnerable?”

“I’d… I’d ask them what they were after.”

“And say you had no money for food and you were going to starve. What would you do then?”

What was the meaning of this?

“I’d… find someone who needed help and ask them for food in… if I helped them.”

“Mhmm. And who is the most important person in the world to you?”

Jack thought.

“My mother.”

The priest nodded. “I know you. You’re Jack Daw, a thief. You’ve shit where you eat. You steal in this city even though the city fathers have asked that thieves only commit their crimes abroad. You’ve stolen from shrines and priests. You’ve beaten innocent people and stolen from poor as well as rich. Like as not you’ve left bastards and broken homes in your wake.”

“No… I can’t be…” Jack’s last memories were of being with his mother, sitting on a spring mattress with her, loving her, comforting her because she was crying. That was who he was. He wasn’t like the wicked men who seemed to orbit his mother, breaking into their life together in that little room and violating it with their presence. They were coming into focus now, too.

“Your memory has been destroyed, as it has for many people in our city as of late. A tumor of the mind. But if I could have stopped it working on you, I wouldn’t have.”

“My brain… hurt?”

“I can’t say if it was damaged when you were attacked, but others have lost their memories in this city. None of them had been beaten so far as I know.” He peered deep into Jack’s maimed face.

“Help me… please.”

The crouching priest shook his hands free of his robes and searched Jack’s empty pockets, unsmiling. He laid his arms across his thighs and looked down at Jack’s face.

“There’s only one group that would help you, and I am loath to bring you to them. The Sodality of the Broken Threshold. A fraternity of wealthy enthusiasts of thievery. They will take you in because you were a criminal, and soon they’ll have you going back to your old ways for their amusement.”

Jack tried to shake his head and grimaced. 

“No,” was all he could muster.

The priest stood up.

“You chose to destroy other people’s futures for your own comfort and convenience, once. If you could start over and live your life differently, would you? We’ll see. The pressure will be on you to become a criminal once more. We’ll find out if the first time was a fluke, or if you really are evil to the core.”

The priest swept around him and up the alleyway. 

“Don’t try to get up unless the rats start eating your eyeballs.”


An oxcart was brought in from the fields. Ruddy farmers hauled Jack up the lanes of Terracetunnel Hill, and he bounced in agony over thousands of rough cobblestones. Finally at the height of his ordeal, spirelike daggers poking up to mug the clouds came into sight and the sweating farmers brought the cart to a stop.

Jack was carried on a board into a vast, cool hall where water was reflecting against the mosaic ceiling.

Jack heard an interested voice.

“Summon physicians from the Organoterrarium.”

“Yes, milord. Might I suggest the apothecaries of Bloodlet Hollow? The prices of the brethren of the Organoterrarium are regarded as extortionate.”

“Pfft. Perhaps among gong farmers and cricket collectors. Be on your way.”

“Yes, milord.”

A man appeared above Jack. He wore a satin doublet and a free-flowing velvet tabard bearing the imagery of sailing ships. He gazed down into Jack’s perforated face.

“Jack Daw, the Sunlight Sparrow, brought so near to death, but then brought to me… don’t worry, my brave young man. My hard-hearted seneschal nowise in charge of your fate. Once you recover, you will eat and drink with us and regale us with your tales. We will toast you and celebrate you, and when you are ready you will return to the world and continue your daring adventures.”

Jack looked up at him. He wanted to tell the man that he would work for him and pay his debt some other way. The man looked down at Jack with admiration and compassion. Jack said nothing, opening his mouths with uncertainty. Then the man patted him on the chest and walked away.


Surgeries followed. Days of tension and thought. Staring at the glimmering ceiling. Jack knew he lay next to a pool of some kind. 

Soon he learned why. The draining of fluids, clear and bloody. They splashed into pans and onto the midnight-blue tile. Lancets, scoops, forceps. Hell. Torture.

His bed was moved to a garden during the days. Lavender and hibiscus bobbed in the wind and under bees. A little burbling river ran past him; some days the lord of the manor would step over some rocks in the middle of it and come check on Jack’s progress, giving him a bracing smile. Once or twice others came with him; men wearing images of towers and railroads, fire-eyed genteel ladies. 

“Jack Daw,” they would say.

He was grateful for the garden. He’d had no memories but of his mother as the surgeons worked; she was all. He had to find her after he got out of here, but moreover, he had to prove that he wasn’t a violator of human beings. The priest had helped him. The lord had helped him. His mother had dandled him. The men who stabbed him were unreal to Jack. Who did he identify with? The pragmatic priest and the industry of these men, obviously. They weren’t thieves, even though Jack thought they were misguided in their love of crime.

Jack remembered the ogres would bang into his mother’s room. Those were criminals. Jack knew that. And he had become one. But no more.

Finally Jack could speak. He’d lost his eye, but his voice box was intact. One day when the man came by to check on him, Jack looked over at him and said,

“Thank you.” 

The man beamed.

“The honor is all mine, Mister Daw. How are you feeling? How able are you to speak?”

“I’ve been speaking to myself under my breath, sir, just to practice. I’m feeling much better. I can lay still with comfort now, and my body feels like it wants to walk around.”

“Yes, and you must be hungry. How have the eggs been going down.”

“Just fine, sir. I’m grateful for everything you’ve done for me. It would mean the world for me if I could pay you back.”

“Ha! Speak nothing of it, my friend. Money matters little to me now. What means something is adventure! Men like you, Jack, inspire men like me. I am bound by an arena of treaties and taxes. You, you live in the ultimate arena! You are a hunter among predator and prey. Look at you! You’ll have marvelous scars as a result of this, Jack, you’ll be a rugged thief, no more the child prodigy. I wear ships upon my back but you, you have a different mark of your profession.”

Jack looked at the sky in dismay.

“Jack, we’ll have dinner tonight. You’ll meet a number of friends of mine; they’ll be eager to make your acquaintance. Your trial is almost done! Take in your sunshine and look forward to your first solid food in weeks. We’ll have lots of pudding and custard and things of that nature!” The man squeezed Jon’s arm and strolled off for a pair of huge oak doors set into the side of his stonebrick manor.


Jon hadn’t walked for some time out of concern for cut muscles in his neck; while he was as stiff as if he’d been in a cast, when a pair of tunic and tights-clad servants came to help him, he found he could walk just fine. The sun was getting low in the sky and Jack was grateful to leave the cool courtyard. 

The servants opened the double doors for Jack. It was a dining hall with a 20’ table creaking with food and wine before a great roaring fireplace where long logs burned.
There were numerous clean, tidy and well-dressed men sitting around the table, discoursing casually and jovially. They fell silent and stood as Jack entered the room, flanked by attentive servants.

The man who had been hosting Jack was at the head of the table. There was a tall, empty, leather-clad chair to his right.

“Welcome, Jack Daw, to Tradegrift Hall. Your place is ready.”

Jack walked slowly and stiffly to the seat to the lord’s right hand. As he approached the table, lit by candelabra chandeliers, the men began a polite round of applause. The lord smiled. Jack sat, and the rest of the men followed suit.

“You’ve made your closest getaway yet, Jack,” said the man. All of the guests leaned over their plates and looked down at Jack. There was ample food of every description; roast meats in pools of juice, buttery pies with flaking crusts, bowls of pears and pomegranates, stews in silver decanters with ladles hidden in their necks, beds of golden roasted potatoes with savory green beans and soft, round dollops of carrot atop them. 

Jack had a constellation of little dishes around his gleaming, gold-rimmed dinner plate. Steak tartare dressed with peppercorn sauce atop a little golden dais, a chilled custard filled with blended cherry cobbler and topped with a dollop of lemon meringue, a raised bowl of molten fudge treacle with a little pilot light active below it, a golden goblet brimming with mulched pear, and a saucer of tomato bisque spattered with a rosemary reduction alongside a silver creamer shaped like a swan.

“Go head, Jack,” said the man after a few moments. Jack bowed his head gratefully and began to eat the pear with a long spoon. To his deprived palate the pears tasted like they had been engineered by God for maximum deliciousness. The fruit of paradise, locked away from the bulk of mankind by their regular meals.

Everyone else began to serve themselves at once. The lord gave Jack a keen eye.

“So, Jack, we’re all very curious about your latest brush with death! Would you regale us with the tale of this battle against knife-wielding killers?”

Jack finished his bite and said,

“I’m sorry sir, but I can’t remember anything about the person that stabbed me.”

“Ah. Well, you must have been severely concussed as part of the fight, that’s to be expected. Why don’t you tell us about the time that you ran out of the Teamster’s Gala with the donation bowl atop your head? I’ve always been curious about how you got in there in the first place.”

Jack sighed, took a bite of the heavenly custard to give himself a moment, and then said,

“I’m sorry sir, but I can’t remember that either. It seems that my memories have been taken away from me. All I can remember is my mother, and some part of my childhood with her.” Jack looked around at the falling faces of the guests. “The priest who had me brought up here told me that this is a regular occurrence in this city.”

The lord wiped his mouth with a handkerchief and cleared his throat.

“Well, that is a disappointment. I know my guests and I had all hoped to be regaled with tales of your daring exploits late into the night, Jack, but if your memories have been taken, then there’s nothing to be done for it. This has been a blight upon our city since the Dawning of the New Year, and alas, the heroes of the underworld seem not to be exempt. But I have an idea of what we can do tonight to make this interesting for all of us. Gentlemen, why don’t we use our collective knowledge and our own personal repositories of theives’ tales to help Jack prepare his next daring raid?”

The men looked around nodding, relieved.

Jack silently tasted his bisque. He could have drunk a gallon of it in one go.

A man spoke up. “I’ve heard that a Mandrakite frigate will be docking in Cape Cittacotte on the return leg of a treasure cruise a week hence. It’ll be like a floating jewelry casket, Jack, and most likely they won’t have a full complement anymore!”
“Mm, and I know of an expedition that is being planned in Troutbridge for a trek into the Place of Things. They are likely to have some kind of centralized pay apparatus.”
“Oh, and Jack, the Princess of Vineforest is known for commissioning new panoplies of jewelry on a bimonthly basis! Perhaps if you could secretly woo her, you could abscond with a bag of her glitter while she’s told the guards to look the other way!”

Jack closed his eyes and lowered his head. It was time. He looked up and around at the guests with an open face.

“My lords, I appreciate your desire to help me. But I don’t want to rob anyone. Whoever I was before I lost my memory, I deeply regret the things I did.”

They looked at him in stunned silence.

“Please understand that I feel more gratitude for your care and hospitality than I can express. You’ve saved my life, and I will be forever in your debt for that. This… it breaks my heart to think of the efforts and care of so many people wasted because a thief came and exploited the attention they’d been giving to a task. I hope that the sailors from Mandrake found what they were looking for. I hope that the expedition to the Place of Things comes back safely. I hope that the Princess of Vineforest… I hope that her jewelry makes her happy. My lords, it’s not my desire to rob, now. I’d rather give my service and receive no more than what is my due. I hope to give back to you for what you’ve given me, and then someday travel to find my mother.”

The lord let out a little worried laugh and stroked his mustache. “Jack, you are a saucy joker. A true thespian.”

“Sir, I mean what I say. If you value me as a role model, I ask that you allow me to become one of your servants and show you what is in my heart to do. I will repay my debt to you by cleaning your home, tending to your linens, taking care of your guests, and whatever else you ask of me, so long as I am contributing to your lives and not draining others of what they have saved by their labor.”

The lord was sitting very upright and grimacing at Jack now.

“Well. I can’t believe it. What kind of thief are you? One drubbing and you turn chickenshit?”

“I’m not a thief, sir. I’d like to be a servant, or a gardener, or-.”

“Oh, and have you trained as a valet? Do you know the first thing about botany?”

“No sir. But-“

“But do you think that I am incapable of finding professionals to see to the details of my life? They are domestics! They are gardeners! You are a thief! Yet you refuse to do your job, and ask me for another? We are not serving you steak tartare and custard because you are a gardener! Look around you! Do the servants sit at this table or do they tarry in the shadows?”

Jack was silent.

“You were here to serve as an inspiration! We saved you and brought you forth because you did things that other men could not and would not! We brought you here because you were a hero, and now you’re nothing but a caitiff! I haven’t saved your life, Jack, I’ve created a pauper!” 

“You shouldn’t lionize thieves,” Jack said quietly. “You’re businessmen. Thieves should have you as role models, not the other way around. I don’t think you should do this anymore, my lord.”

“And now the cur disrespects me at my own table,” growled the lord, “You’ve lost your memories and yet you think yourself wise. I think it’s time you remembered why you turned to thievery in the first place.” He nodded to the servants. “Expel this wreckage and clear his spot from the table.”

Jack stood up and stepped between the two servants who appeared promptly from the shadows. He walked between them as they guided him through a reception hall that was filled with taxidermied animal heads set over crossed hunting rifles and spears. The servants did not seize him, glower upon him or hustle him in any way. When they reached the fine oak foyer of the house, one of the servants quickly clasped a silver piece into Jack’s hand. Then they opened the door for him.

“Thank you,” Jack said. The servant made no expression.

Jack walked out into the cool street atop Terracetunnel Hill in Saxherm.


He was turned away from business after business, home after home. It was two days since he’d had any food. Still he pressed on. This city had luxury. Surplus. Someone would be able to take him on. 

He stood outside a cordwainer’s shop. There was a big, bald, ruddy man with a thick white goatee and spectacles inside. He wore an apron and was sweeping the floor intently with a broom.

“Hey, sir, sorry, I’ll be with you in just a minute,” said the cordwainer, sweeping the dust away from Jack, “Gotta keep this place tidy or the shoes get messy when people take them for a walk.”

Jack bowed. 

“Ok, what can I do you for?” asked the cordwainer, setting down his broom. 

“Sir, my name’s Jack Dawson. I’m seeking employment and I’d like to offer my services to you.”

“Oh? Who’d you apprentice for?”

“I haven’t been through an apprenticeship, master.”

“Is that right? What are your skills?”

“I have a deep desire to work.”

“Huh. Shoemaking’s a technical profession and you have no skills. What could I use you for?”

Jack remembered how her mother spent the afternoons, making order before the brutal nights.

“I could clean, sir. I could make your floors and shelves beautiful. I could keep your shoes and tools arranged. I could keep your windows clean and sweep up outside your shop. Then you can be more free to focus on your craftsmanship.”

“I can’t pay someone to clean full-time, Jack.”

“I don’t need money, sir. I just need bread and water.” 

The man looked at Jack with confusion.

“Who are you? You’re a rough looking character, Dawson.”

“I’ve traveled far in this world, sir. I’m looking for my mother, who I separated from as a boy. But now I need to put down roots for awhile and gather my strength again. That’s why I’m willing to work without pay.”

“Huh. Well, I’ll tell you what. A lot of folks in my position would say thanks but no thanks, hit the road again. I don’t need the trouble. But I’m a man who’s willing to take a risk when I see upside. Wait here.” He went into the back room of the shop and returned with a steel pitcher of water. “Get out there into the alley and wash your face. Then come back and I’ll have you take over the broom and finish what I started. After that, you’re gonna take a rag and start washing the windows. You do that right, you can come back tomorrow and I might have some food for you. And you can call me Mr. Tumwater.”

Jack bowed low. He went, washed, returned and went to work. It was a mercy.

That night he watched the sun set over Saxherm from the woods of a nearby field. When he went to sleep in a leaf-covered pile of loose earth, freezing and beset by insects, he dreamed of the most beautiful shoe shop in Saxherm.

When he arrived at the crack of dawn the next morning, the shop was yet to open. He was hunting cigarette butts outside of it when the cordwainer arrived, carrying several paper bags.

“You picking up butts?” he asked.
“Yes, Mr. Tumwater.”
“Cut that shit out and come have some fucking breakfast,” said the cordwainer, staring at him.
“Thank you, Mr Tumwater.”
After Jack washed his hands they ate crusty white bread with hunks of cheddar cheese and drank paper cups of water.
“Gonna have you on rotation. Sweep, dust, polish the windows, scrub the floors, clean my tools, arrange the wares nice and neat. Once you’re done with one, just move to the next. We’ll see how you handle that. You do it right, I might have you shining shoes. That’s a position of opportunity for those that don’t squander it. Depending on whether your help increases my clientele, maybe more than that. We’ll see.”

Jack worked like this for a week. The shop began to glow. People walked in just to be somewhere pleasant. The cordwainer started getting more work than he could handle, and turning people down seemed to increase demand for his wares all the more. He bought Jack fresh clothes and a bed for the workshop. He trusted him. Jack began to shine shoes, take measurements and make purchases of leather, wood and lacing in the market. But on Jack’s twenty-first day, the cordwainer came in, slammed the door and screamed,

“JACK! Get up!”

Jack quickly rolled out of bed and came onto the sales floor.

“Master?”

“Jack Daw,” growled the cordwainer, “Thief extraordinaire. One of my clients told me who you are at the bar last night. What’s the meaning of this hoodwink? What are you trying to set me up for?”

Jack was crestfallen.

“Mr. Tumwater, I was Jack Daw. But I lost my memory, and I decided not to steal anymore. That’s why I’m working for you like this.”

“Hm. Well we’ll see about that. You’re lucky they love thieves in this town. I’m not sure what to believe. You already lied to me once.”

“I didn’t lie to you, sir. I believe that I have traveled far, and it’s true that I am seeking my mother.”

“You didn’t tell me the whole truth. Get down to the market and get us some apples and cheese for breakfast. I have to think some more about this.”

“Yes, master.” Jack hesitated, then gestured around the bright, sparkling, well-appointed shoe shop. “This… this is my testament.”

“We’ll see, Jack. It won’t be your final testament.”

Jack walked down the cobblestone street into the canvas stalls of the markets that thronged the gate. He was distracted, and turning a corner, bumped into a large man who was unloading sacks of wheat from a cart.

“Watch it, pu-“ the man trailed off.

There was a lightning bolt and thunderclap as the man’s fist connected with Jack’s face, lurching him from his feet and sending him sprawling onto the cobblestones.

“You little rat!” the man screamed, “Thieving pimp!” A kick bashed into Jack’s ribs and sent him curling into himself, unable to breathe. 

The huge, pot-bellied man straddled Jack and was about to start windmilling him with his fists when a pair of market guards wearing castle-keep livery rushed him and pushed him back off of Jack.

“He fucked my daughter! He- you fucked her, you son of a bitch! She missed her period! Now what? Now what will she do?” the man screamed as the grimacing market guards held him back. Jack staggered to his feet as people gazed from in and around the market stalls.

“Serves him right,” someone commented.

“W- where do you live? I’ll- I’ll try-” gasped Jack.

“Millsberry farm! Millsberry farm! Come out and die, rat fuck! Come out just you and me, piglet!”

“I’m-“

“Time to fuck off, loverboy,” said one of the guards, stabbing a finger up the market aisle.

Jack lurched away from the scene, his head ringing. What had he done?

He thought back to his mother, alone in the world but for him.

I created another thief and another broken woman.

Jack walked into a market square and stood leaning against a stand pole in a state of heartbreak. There was a cheerful fountain in the center of the square which he stared at with unfocused eyes. His gaze rose and fell upon several men in dark leather coats standing at a bookseller’s stand. The centermost of them was a head taller than the others and seemed to suffer from some kind of skin deformation; his scalp was incredibly lumpy, and here and there were little flecks of green blading through the skin. 

The big man was gesticulating in the air in a pleased way, as if he was laying out and comparing his favorite kinds of ice cream. Then he lunged across the bookseller’s counter, grabbed the man by his orange wool collar and dragged him roughly over the top of it, spilling books all over the ground. The enormous thug turned with one hand on the bookseller’s lapels, and gestured expansively across the market square. The other thugs took a step back, their hands in their pockets. Shopkeepers were beginning to notice this and the square was slowly draining of pedestrians.
The bookseller was an older man with tousled gray hair, an eagle-beak nose and spectacles. His eyes were wide and he had his hands placed gently on the vast articulating surface of the gang leader’s forearm.

The gang leader’s true terror was on display now. His nose had strange disc-blades of cartilage beneath the flesh on one side. His arms were mighty and gnarled but his fingers were freakishly deformed; spindly, winding, unnaturally articulated. He grinned into the face of the bookseller, and his teeth were a gleaming amber color. His eyes were bloodshot and looked squished in his bald, narrow, goateed head. The trunk of his body was vast but crooked, his waist rising left and his chest rising right. His skin was odd; it looked hard, dry, uneven, like he was wearing some kind of fishscale armor just below his flesh. All in all he gave the impression of a man whose bones had been splintered, but then healed larger and stronger than could be imagined. 
The thug was wearing a pair of weatherbeaten olive slacks and a filthy, ruined white undershirt. He had an enormous sack of coins hanging over his crotch in an ostentatiously vulgar manner, and he had a huge knife that was almost a shortsword tucked into the back of his pants.

He reached down and picked up an ancient tome that had been seeded with postcards, scrapbook pages and photographs by some previous owner. He waggled it in front of the bookseller’s face as he spoke to him before pitching it into the fountain. The bookseller closed his eyes and the square was silent except for the burbling of the fountain and the assailant’s jovial speech, which Jack couldn’t quite make out. The gang leader reached over to the countertop and gathered up a second pair of books with his huge, knotted maelstrom of a hand and pitched them into the water; one was an illuminated manuscript, the other a drafting book which an artist of explosive imagination had filled with vibrant work.

The bookseller began to speak urgently. This was a mistake. He had his fingers tightly steepled and was urgently appealing to the criminal, whose smile turned to a kind of vicious grimace. He put a hand on the bookseller’s shoulder and forced him to his knees with a jolt. Then he took the man’s hair in a bunch, curled up his grotesque knotted fingers and punched the man in the face with a tremendous clapping noise. He withdrew and did it again, and again. With each punch the face became less recognizable and the bookseller more limp. His nose broke, his eyelids went purple, cuts appeared all across his brow, his teeth broke, his lips cut, blood pouring down his chin onto the cobblestones. Jack and the other merchants looked on with horror. The huge thug raised the bookseller’s limp head by his hair a bit and peered into it.

Jack circumnavigated the square and approached the group from behind. One of the crooks standing in the rear had an antler-handled knife in a sheath on the rear of his belt. Jack slipped this out with frictionless quickness and grace: a flick of the wrist sent the knife airborne from its mooring before Jack plucked it out of the air like he was catching a fly. 

Jack pivoted across the man whose knife he’d taken and made a pirouette into the center of the group, extending his leg and arm as he did so; his foot came down parallel to the crammed boot of the gang leader, and his knife came down between the hulking thug’s clavicle and trapezius, neatly severing his subclavian artery.

Jack’s hand rested across the thug’s shoulder. His skin felt like battle armor. He would have been an impossible opponent. Guess I am handsy, thought Jack.

The thug whirled on Jack, his hand lurching to the knife buried in his body. He took a step back, then lunged out and caught Jack by the lapels, his knuckles scraping Jack’s chest like tree bark. The thug’s eyes were wild, and his mouth opened. He pulled Jack in to say something, then fell to one knee. The other gangsters gasped and each took a step inwards or out. The light drained from the ringleader’s eyes and he fainted, falling nose-first with a crack onto the cobblestones between Jack’s legs. Armored skin and terrible hands or no, he would still die in moments.

“You son of a bitch!” one of the thugs yelled and launched a swing at Jack from behind. Jack slipped the blow and hammered a balled fist up into the man’s jaw, who promptly seized up like a mummy and fell onto the stones, dislocating his arm beneath him before launching into a buzz saw snore. Two thugs instantly came at Jack from the left and right of the slain leader; right hand still ringing from his first hit, Jack launched a punch across the left one’s jaw, sending him falling sidelong with his arms out like a scarecrow, and then wheeled a punch with his other hand into the jaw of the second thug, who was jerked upright and then fell on his face like a 2x4.

Jack felt someone punch him in the back and he wheeled around. There was a man with greasy, shaggy hair. He was holding a raised knife. 

“How many times do I have to stab you, Jack Daw?” 

Jack’s eye went wide. 

“Guess I’ve gotta get your other eye!” He advanced on Jack, raising his knife for a hammer blow. Jack walked backwards and bumped into a signpost. Suddenly a vase flew through the air and broke across Mastiff’s head and shoulders. He wheeled around, bleeding from his ear, and a bronze lamp bashed him in the forearm, making him recoil. The merchants were throwing their wares at him and getting bolder by the second, stepping out from their stalls to throw at close range or advancing around the square with candlesticks, kettles, cans of paint.

A young, bald merchant came in and threw a steel wrench into Mastiff’s legs at point blank range, sending him reeling with a bony clang. Mastiff limp-sprinted away from the square. 

A pudgy, bearded merchant came forward towards Jack as the rest came to a stop. “Boy, you’re bleeding pretty good there.”
Jack checked his knuckles. Then he patted his front and back. His back was flowing with warmth. He drew his hands out and the merchant sucked his teeth at the blood.

“Yeah,” said Jack quietly. He thought of his mother, so kind but so poor. He thought of the way he’d left her to find a way out of want.

He walked to the hulking corpse of the gang leader and undid the fat bag of coins from where it lay between his thighs. He looked inside. It was filled with gold coins and weighed several pounds. He closed it and hung it around his neck.

Then he started walking. He walked through the market, and a few merchants who had stall minders followed him. He walked through the inn-lined reception street and a group of children followed him. He walked through Terracetunnel gate and a pair of soldiers followed him, calling out, “Hey, you can’t bleed here!”

He walked along the tree tunnel paths in the amber light of morning. His legs were soaked and tingling with pinpricks. His breath was getting shorter as if his lungs were shrinking. He came to a crossroads and saw many arrowed signs. He followed the one for Millsberry. He walked out into the open through the farmers’ fields. His breath began to agonize him. He approached the whitewashed farmhouse and the brown barn. His legs were unstrung as he reached the barn and he fell to his knees, crawling around it and towards the house. He dragged his form towards the door, towards the familiar scent of bacon, through the ineffable lethargy that was descending upon him.

The door opened. The farmer came out, submachine gun in hand.

“So! You’ve… you’ve come…”

Jon looked up at him, pale and clammy. He took the albatross of gold in his hands. It felt like a vast boulder to his shaking hands.

“For your daughter… your grandchild… and… my…”

Jack fell towards, but he fell with his hands extended, cupping the bag. He was smiling. He fell asleep with his cheek in the grass. The farmer ran his hand through his hair, his mouth slightly open. His daughter ran past him to kneel over Jack.

The procession removed their hats.


Jack’s body lay in state in Tradegrift Hall. The marble slab where he rested was surrounded by candles in the darkness. A number of the city’s lords and magnates stood about, studying the corpse with hands on their mouths and chins.

A man in a black and gold brocade doublet and cape spoke.
“He was our hero before. He is our hero now. But this was a superior heroism. The guards shall imprison the man known as ‘Mastiff.’”
“You’re sure?”
“The death of a man like Jack is not ‘their business’ anymore. The Anaconda Gang are not even thieves since their deal with Lord Carver. They’re something lower than thieves. And Jack was… something higher. I think it’s time we made that distinction. I’ll deal with Lord Carver.”


She dandled little Robert on her knee by the fire. Her father passed through the room on the way to the kitchen, puffing a pipe in his suspenders.

“Mama, you said you’d tell me about papa when I got bigger,” said the boy.

She smiled and looked into the fire.

“Your father loved you very much. He wanted the best for you. He was a good, brave man, and he wanted to show you what that meant. In fact, he sacrificed his life for it.”

“How can he show me that if he’s gone?”

“He’s not gone. He’s right here in the story I’m about to tell you. ”

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